PROJECT HAIL MARY

Chapter 1 — Storyboard

74 PANELS SCI-FI THRILLER MINIMALIST SKETCH AUTHOR: ANDY WEIR
ACT I — AWAKENING
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EXTREME WIDE — Darkness. A faint oval shape glows dimly in void.
EXTREME WIDE PITCH BLACK
Establishing void. No sense of scale. Total disorientation.
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WHAT'S TWO PLUS TWO?
INSERT — Abstract audio-wave UI. Computer voice emanates from void.
INSERT CLINICAL COMPUTER
"What's two plus two?" — soft, flat, emotionless.
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zzz
CLOSE-UP — Man's face in profile. Eyes closed. Deep unconscious sleep.
CLOSE-UP DORMANT RYLAND (UNKNOWN)
Protagonist — male, Caucasian, stubble. Identity unknown.
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Lrmln
EXTREME CLOSE-UP — Lips parting. Garbled sound: "Lrmln"
ECU STRUGGLE RYLAND
Mouth not cooperating. Brain-body disconnect.
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EXTREME CLOSE-UP — Eyelid. Sealed shut. Slight tremor visible.
ECU TENSION RYLAND
Trying to open. Nothing happens. Claustrophobic.
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ECU — Eyelid twitches. A hairline crack of light breaks through.
ECU BREAKTHROUGH RYLAND
"I felt a wiggle." First victory. Micro-tension release.
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BLINDING WHITE — RETINAS SEAR
POV WIDE — Eyes snap open. Entire frame: searing white. Shapes barely perceptible.
POV WIDE BLINDING RYLAND POV
"Blinding light sears my retinas." Maximum visual shock. Widest panel.
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POV — Blinding white resolving. Shapes emerge: ceiling, lights, arms.
POV DISORIENTING
Vision adjusting. First glimpse of robot arms — unidentified.
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LOW ANGLE looking UP — Two robotic arms hanging from ceiling, tools visible.
LOW ANGLE OMINOUS ROBOT ARMS
First clear look at "Arms of Harassment." Creepy surgical tools.
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HIGH ANGLE / TOP-DOWN — Body covered in tubes and electrode pads.
HIGH ANGLE CLINICAL HORROR RYLAND
"More tubes than I can count." Vulnerable. Medical. Red dots = electrodes.
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MEDIUM CLOSE — Breathing mask tight on face. Hose snaking behind head.
MEDIUM CLOSE SUFFOCATING RYLAND
"A breathing mask. Tight to my face." Claustrophobia reinforced.
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PATIENT 1 P2 P3
AERIAL / TOP-DOWN — Circular room overview. Three hammock beds in triangle formation.
AERIAL STARK / CLINICAL ALL THREE PATIENTS
Room layout revealed. Not a hospital. Something stranger.
ACT I-B — QUESTIONS WITH NO ANSWERS
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MEDIUM — Round hatch in wall with wheel handle. Ladder below it.
MEDIUM SUBMARINE / ISOLATED
"Like on a submarine." No door. Only escape is up through the hatch.
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Wh—
MEDIUM CLOSE — Eyes half open. Mouth forming words. "Where... am... I?"
MEDIUM CLOSE CONFUSION RYLAND
First real question. Gaining more vocal control.
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WHAT'S THE CUBE ROOT OF EIGHT?
LOW ANGLE — Ceiling camera/speaker. Cold light. Question repeating.
LOW ANGLE OPPRESSIVE COMPUTER
Computer ignores his real question. Just math. "Incorrect."
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2e^2iπ
MEDIUM CLOSE — Subtle smirk. Testing computer's intelligence with complex math answer.
MEDIUM CLOSE WRY HUMOR RYLAND
"Just wanted to see how smart the computer was. Answer: not very."
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zzz
MEDIUM WIDE — Falls back asleep mid-thought. Body goes slack.
MEDIUM WIDE FADE OUT RYLAND
Involuntary sleep. Sedated? Exhausted? Ambiguous. End of first session.
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MEDIUM — Wakes to robot arm on face, shaving him. Wide-eyed shock.
MEDIUM STARTLED / DARK HUMOR RYLAND + ARM
"You were shaving me?" Half-stubble, half-smooth. Absurdist horror.
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CLOSE-UP — Hand. Fingers wiggle on command. First real motor control.
CLOSE-UP DETERMINED RYLAND'S HAND
"They wiggle as instructed." Small triumph. Recovery has begun.
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LOW ANGLE — Robot arms rush toward him from ceiling. Fast descent. Flinch reflex.
LOW ANGLE ALARMING ARMS + RYLAND
"They move fast. Before I know it—" Tubes removed in seconds.
ACT II — WHO AM I?
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3 TUBES REMAIN
MEDIUM — Sitting up on bed. Only 3 tubes remain. IV, catheter, butt tube marked in red.
MEDIUM GRIM HUMOR RYLAND
The tubes he least wants are the ones that stay.
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MUSCULAR? ?
CLOSE-UP — Muscular arm raised. Doesn't match "coma patient" expectation.
CLOSE-UP MYSTERY RYLAND'S ARM
"Shouldn't there be muscle atrophy?" Something is wrong with the logic.
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? WHAT'S YOUR NAME?
MEDIUM CLOSE — Face: blank. Computer asks his name. He has no answer.
MEDIUM CLOSE EXISTENTIAL HORROR RYLAND
"Only now does it occur to me: I don't know who I am."
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DINER ? ASTRO ? NO NAME NO MEMORY
WIDE SPLIT — Two dim memory fragments at edges. Central void: identity unknown.
CONCEPTUAL WIDE EXISTENTIAL / FRAGMENTED RYLAND'S MIND
Visual representation of amnesia. Fragments hover. Core = empty.
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BITE ME.
CLOSE-UP — Pulls IV from arm. Blood droplet. Defiant act against the computer.
CLOSE-UP DEFIANCE RYLAND'S ARM
"Bite me." First act of rebellion. Consequences incoming.
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!!!
MEDIUM CLOSE — Face screams in agony as catheter is yanked free.
MEDIUM CLOSE PAIN / DARK COMEDY RYLAND
"Like peeing a golf ball." Most painful panel. Still darkly funny.
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MEDIUM WIDE — Curled on floor under bed. Robot arms hover at edge, can't reach.
MEDIUM WIDE DESPERATE REFUGE RYLAND + ARMS
Temporary safe zone. Arms wait patiently. Stalemate.
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HIGH ANGLE CLOSE — Eyes looking down at catheter on floor. Thin red line of blood.
HIGH ANGLE VISCERAL RYLAND POV
"A thin red line of—" Then the memory flash cuts in.
ACT III — THE MEMORY FLASH
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ASTRONOMY CURIOSITIES THE THIN RED LINE Irina Petrova, PhD SALLY'S DINER — SAN FRANCISCO
WIDE MEMORY FLASH — Warm diner. Coffee. Toast. Phone with email subject: "The Thin Red Line"
MEMORY WIDE WARM / NOSTALGIC RYLAND (MEMORY)
Jarring tonal contrast: warm sepia vs. cold white hospital. First recognizable memory.
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THE THIN RED LINE
INSERT — Phone screen. Email from Dr. Irina Petrova. Subject glows red.
INSERT WARM / CLUE
The email he wasn't supposed to read. Key plot seed.
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VENUS SUN 25.984 μm IR
INSERT — Diagram from email. IR arc rising from Sun's north pole, bending toward Venus.
INSERT DIAGRAM SCIENTIFIC / OMINOUS
The anomaly. "Thin Red Line" = this arc. 37 million km long. No explanation.
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What the heck was that?
MEDIUM — Snaps back to cold room. Sitting against wall, processing the memory flash.
MEDIUM COLD RETURN RYLAND
"What the heck was that?" Memory arrived without warning.
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FLOOR — BLOOD SPACE — IR ARC
SPLIT FRAME — Thin red blood line above / Thin red IR arc in space below. The connection.
SPLIT FRAME SYMBOLIC / THRILLER
The red line triggered the memory. Brain found a pattern. Why?
ACT IV — EXPLORATION & DARK DISCOVERY
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MEDIUM — Slides out from under bed, pressing against wall. Arms converge.
MEDIUM TENSE RYLAND + ARMS
Still evading. But motivated now — needs to see the other patients.
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MEDIUM — First clear view of "Ms. Mummy" in hammock bed. Desiccated. Long-dead.
MEDIUM GOTHIC / UNSETTLING DEAD PATIENT 2
"Desiccated skin draped over bones." Long hair visible — female. Dead long ago.
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MEDIUM — Second mummy, even more decayed. Skin crumbling. Dead far longer.
MEDIUM DECAYED / ANCIENT DEAD PATIENT 3
"He's been dead even longer. Skin crumbling away." Time scale alarming.
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WIDE — Stands between two mummified patients. Small figure dwarfed by the dead.
WIDE ISOLATED / MORTALITY RYLAND (SOLE SURVIVOR)
The scale of time hits. He's the only one who survived.
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CLOSE-UP — Rubbing half-shaved face. Deductive thinking mode.
CLOSE-UP CONTEMPLATIVE RYLAND
"Arms designed for long-term unconsciousness. I was in a coma."
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LOW ANGLE POV — Looking up at the hatch. 10-foot ladder. Freedom above.
LOW ANGLE POV ASPIRATIONAL
The only way out. He has to climb it.
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10 ft not 3m
CLOSE-UP — Deductive thinking. Thought bubble: "10 ft." He thinks in imperial units.
CLOSE-UP DETECTIVE LOGIC RYLAND
"I think in imperial. Not Canadian. English or American." Finding clues in himself.
ACT V — THE CLIMB & THE FALL
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MEDIUM — Shuffling along curved wall, back for support. Panting. Arms hover nearby.
MEDIUM EXHAUSTED / DETERMINED RYLAND
"I feel like I've run a marathon." Willpower over weakness.
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CLOSE-UP — Hands grip ladder rung. White-knuckle effort. Foot finding bottom rung.
CLOSE-UP GRIM DETERMINATION RYLAND'S HANDS
"Both feet on the lower rung now." Slow, shaking progress.
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CLOSE-UP — Arm reaching for next rung. Hand trembling. Not strong enough.
CLOSE-UP FAILING EFFORT RYLAND'S ARM
"My hand just isn't strong enough." The climb he needs to make — can't yet.
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MEDIUM — Falls backward off ladder. Arms flailing. Motion trail from point of fall.
MEDIUM SUDDEN IMPACT / PANIC RYLAND
"I fall backward off the ladder. This is going to hurt."
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MEDIUM — Robot arms catch him perfectly mid-fall. Body horizontal, suspended gently.
MEDIUM UNEXPECTED GRACE RYLAND + ARMS
"It doesn't hurt. The robot arms catch me." His jailer is also his safety net.
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MEDIUM — Laid gently back into bed. Arms retract. Almost tender.
MEDIUM BITTERSWEET COMFORT RYLAND + ARMS
"Like a mother putting her child to sleep." Disturbing warmth from a machine.
ACT VI — "WRONGNESS" & MORE CLUES
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?
CLOSE-UP — Staring at ceiling. Thought bubble replaying the fall. Something is wrong with it.
MEDIUM CLOSE PUZZLED FOCUS RYLAND
"Something bugs me about how I fell. A wrongness." Can't name it yet.
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drift...
WIDE — Bed gently rocks. Body relaxes. Drifts toward sleep again.
WIDE LULLABY DARK RYLAND
"The gentle rocking of the bed is comforting." Another involuntary sleep.
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— TIME PASSES — HOW LONG? UNKNOWN.
TRANSITION PANEL — CRT scan lines. Time jump marker. Duration unknown.
TRANSITION LIMINAL
Visual chapter break. Time is unreliable here.
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ECU — Eye opens wide without effort. Alert. Catch light. Fully awake.
EXTREME CLOSE-UP ALERT / RECOVERED RYLAND'S EYE
"I open my eyes without effort. That's progress." Recovery continues.
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MEDIUM SIDE — Pushes palms into bed. Torso rising. Sitting up under own power.
MEDIUM SIDE EXERTION RYLAND
"Palms to the bed and push. Actually getting up!" First time successfully sitting.
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MEDIUM WIDE — POV from bed, seated. Two mummified patients visible in their beds across room.
MEDIUM WIDE LONELY HORROR RYLAND + MUMMIES
Triangle arrangement now clear. He's the only living one.
ACT VII — FINAL ATTEMPTS & SMALL VICTORIES
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PREV NOW
MEDIUM — Second climb attempt. Higher than before. Green vs red progress lines.
MEDIUM HOPEFUL RYLAND
"I'm recovering more and more." Each attempt slightly better.
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CLOSE-UP — Face on ladder. Panting, sweating. Eyes strained but determined.
CLOSE-UP GRIT RYLAND
"I feel like my whole body is made of lead." But he keeps going.
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EAT
MEDIUM — Wakes to a toothpaste tube on chest. "EAT" printed on it. Computer: "Eat."
MEDIUM ABSURDIST RYLAND + TUBE
"Eat." The machine feeds him through a tube of paste. Nutrition as function.
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CLOSE-UP — Squeezes paste into mouth. Unenthusiastic side-eye. Survival, not pleasure.
CLOSE-UP GRIM PRAGMATISM RYLAND
Food as fuel. Whatever's in the tube, he needs it. Chapter closing.
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WIDE — Seated alone in the curved room. Mummies flanking. Eating from tube. Solitude.
WIDE ISOLATION / QUIET DREAD RYLAND (SOLE SURVIVOR)
Full weight of situation. Alone. No name. No past. Surrounded by dead.
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EN SF 10ft ??? NAME
INSERT — Brain map. Nodes: English speaker, San Francisco, Imperial units. Center node: missing name.
INSERT / CONCEPTUAL DETECTIVE THRILLER
He's building a profile of himself from clues. The hole at the center: identity.
ACT VIII — THE MYSTERY DEEPENS
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NO DOOR
WIDE — Full circular room. Annotated: no door, only vents and hatch above. Quarantine logic.
WIDE CLAUSTROPHOBIC
"No door. Just a ladder." Maybe quarantine. Maybe something else entirely.
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MEDIUM — Cupped hands around mouth, calling to other patients. Silence. They're dead.
MEDIUM DESPERATE LONELINESS RYLAND
"Hey! One of you, wake up!" They won't. They can't.
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J— John? INCORRECT.
CLOSE-UP — Attempting to guess own name. "J—John?" Hopeful eyes. Computer: "Incorrect."
CLOSE-UP HOPEFUL / DEFLATED RYLAND
"I'm Caucasian, male, English speaker. Play the odds: J—John?" It's not John.
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waaait...
CLOSE-UP — Eyes drooping mid-protest. Sedated through IV. "...waaaait..." fades.
CLOSE-UP HELPLESS RYLAND
"A wave of fatigue grips me." The machine decides when he's conscious.
ACT IX — SELF-DISCOVERY & ENDGAME QUESTIONS
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COMA PATIENT? BEACH BOD ≠ COMA
MEDIUM WIDE — Looking down at own body. Muscular. No atrophy. Doesn't add up.
HIGH ANGLE MEDIUM COGNITIVE DISSONANCE RYLAND
"Beach-bod buff. Not what coma looks like." The mystery deepens.
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NO BUMPS / NO SCARS
TOP-DOWN — Both hands probing skull for injuries. Fingers pressing. Nothing found.
TOP-DOWN CLINICAL SELF-EXAM RYLAND
"No lumps or scars or bandages." No physical trauma explains the coma.
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WHY COMA? DISEASE? WHERE AM I? WHO AM I? HOW LONG? WHAT NEXT?
CONCEPTUAL WIDE — Silhouette surrounded by floating unanswered questions in the dark.
CONCEPTUAL EXISTENTIAL VOID RYLAND
The internal monologue visualized. Every answer spawns two questions.
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MEDIUM — Sliding leg off bed. Bed wobbles. Arms hover in standby. Testing limits.
MEDIUM CAUTIOUS PROGRESS RYLAND + ARMS
"One leg over the edge. Bed wobbles. Arms rush toward me."
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FIRST STEPS
LOW ANGLE — First steps. Feet touch floor. Wobbling, barely upright. Huge milestone.
LOW ANGLE CLOSE TRIUMPH / FRAGILITY RYLAND
"I get to my feet. Slow, enormous effort." On his own two feet. First time.
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TOO WEAK
MEDIUM — Legs buckle. Sinks to floor. Arms barely catching himself. Knees down.
MEDIUM DEFEAT / DETERMINATION RYLAND
"I take a step. Then another. Then I sink to the floor." Not yet. But soon.
EPILOGUE — THE CHAPTER CLIFFHANGER
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FULL WIDE — Complete room. Two dead, one alive. Ladder to unknown hatch above. Arms wait.
FULL WIDE ATMOSPHERIC / DREAD ALL CHARACTERS
The chapter's full picture. One survivor. No name. The only way is up.
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I know LIBERIA uses imperial
CLOSE-UP — Bemused expression. Thought bubble: "I know Liberia uses imperial units."
CLOSE-UP DRY COMEDY RYLAND
"I know Liberia uses imperial but not my own name. Irritating." Character voice established.
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LOW ANGLE POV — Long upward gaze at hatch. Ladder below. Warm glow hints beyond.
LOW ANGLE POV HOPEFUL UNKNOWN
The question: what's beyond the hatch? Everything the chapter builds toward.
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EXPECTED ACTUAL Δ ?
INSERT DIAGRAM — Two fall trajectories. Expected vs actual. A delta. Something is off.
INSERT FORESHADOWING
"Something bugs me about how I fell. A wrongness." Gravity clue — are we not on Earth?
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MEDIUM — Settled back in bed. Tube in hand. Eyes open, awake. LED above. Arms dormant.
MEDIUM QUIET DETERMINATION RYLAND
The chapter ends where it began — him in bed. But now he is awake. Thinking. Alive.
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NO NAME NO MEMORY TWO DEAD ONE ALIVE
EXTREME WIDE — Room tiny in endless void. "No Name. No Memory. Two Dead. One Alive."
EXTREME WIDE VAST UNKNOWN / DREAD ALL
Final establishing shot. The scale of isolation. End of Chapter 1.