CHAPTER 6

Project Hail Mary — Fan Storyboard

88 PANELS 14 ACTS AUTHOR: ANDY WEIR
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I
RESOLVE IN THE DORMITORY
01
IF I'M GOING TO DIE...
MEDIUM WIDE — Grace lies on dormitory bed, staring at ceiling. NannyBot arms dormant above.
MEDIUM WIDERESOLVEGRACE
"If I'm going to die, it's going to have meaning." Quiet determination in the dark.
02
CLOSE-UP — Face: set jaw, direct stare. A man making peace with his fate.
CLOSE-UPSTEELYGRACE
"Figure out what can be done. Send answers to Earth. Then die." The mission redefined.
03
DAY 4 — MEAL 2 carrot?
INSERT CLOSE — Squeeze tube "Day 4 Meal 2." A small carrot cube near the nozzle.
INSERTDRY HUMOR
"I think I'm chewing on a little cube of carrot." First texture in days. Small joy.
04
"More water!"
MEDIUM — NannyBot arm descends swiftly with a full water cup. Grace's hand reaches up.
MEDIUMMUNDANE / COMICNANNYBOT + GRACE
"More water!" The arms respond instantly. Three days ago they were monsters. Now: furniture.
05
DORMITORY — BEST THINKING SPOT
WIDE — Dormitory. Grace seated upright on bed, thinking. The room: sparse, clean, his alone.
WIDECONTEMPLATIVEGRACE
"The dormitory is a good place for thinking. My nice comfortable bed." A safe space carved from chaos.
06
PRIORITY LIST 1. Scour system for Astrophage 2. What to do with fuel? 3. How to steer the ship? 4. How to send beetles? 5. Why was I chosen?
INSERT — Mental priority list. Five critical unknowns rendered as a dossier card.
INSERTMISSION CRITICAL
The full scope of the task. Each question a mountain. He decides to start small.
II
THE CONTROL ROOM
07
WIDE — Control room. Screens everywhere, blinking lights. Grace in pilot chair at center.
WIDEINFORMATION OVERLOADGRACE
"The control room has a nice chair but it's cramped and has blinking lights everywhere."
08
"Flight manual." Ship information in control room.
MEDIUM — Grace calls out "Flight manual." NannyBot speaker replies blandly from ceiling.
MEDIUMFRUSTRATION / DRYGRACE + NANNYBOT
"Ship information can be found in the control room." — Same answer every time. "You kind of suck."
09
MENU Navigation Sci. Instruments Utility Beetles
INSERT — Touchscreen top-left corner tapped. A panel menu drops down: Navigation, Instruments, Utility, Beetles.
INSERTDISCOVERY
"Any screen can show any instrument panel. They're interchangeable." Customizable displays.
10
HELIOSCOPE TAU CETI
INSERT — Helioscope display. Tau Ceti glows amber against deep black. Familiar, like the sun.
INSERTAWE / CONFIRMATION
"Tau Ceti — same spectral type, color. I'd mistake it for the sun." He's really here.
11
PETROVASCOPE ERROR Cannot operate while spin drive is active. "Hmph."
INSERT — Petrovascope screen: solid ERROR. Spin drive active = blinding IR interference.
INSERTBLOCKED / FRUSTRATED
"Hmph." The one tool he needs most — unavailable until engines cut off.
12
UTILITY — CALC 6g × c² = ? 5.4×10¹⁴ W 540 TRILLION JOULES/SEC MORE THAN SOLAR SURFACE DECELERATING TOWARD TAU CETI → HAIL MARY
WIDE SPLIT — Left: calculator shows 540 trillion watts. Right: ship diagram, engine plume blasting away from star.
WIDE SPLITSTAGGERING SCALEGRACE / HAIL MARY
"More energy than the surface of the sun." That IR blowback would blind the Petrovascope instantly.
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NAVIGATION — COURSE τ
INSERT — Navigation screen. Tau Ceti at center, four elliptical orbits, yellow course line from off-screen.
INSERTORIENTATION
"Four planetary orbits shown as thin white ellipses." The system laid out. The path is automated.
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τ = TAU CETI not "t" !
INSERT CLOSE — Hail Mary mission crest. The "t" is a tau — τ. Grace's sudden realization.
INSERTEUREKA / DRY HUMOR
"Ohhhh — that lowercase t on the crest is a tau. For Tau Ceti." Small delight in the dark.
15
TIME TO ENGINE CUTOFF 0005:20:39 DAYS : HRS : MIN 4-DIGIT DAYS = 1000+ DAY JOURNEY
CLOSE — Countdown timer: 0005:20:39. Amber digits. Grace's face lit from below.
CLOSEWEIGHT OF TIMEGRACE
"Four-digit days — the journey took at least 1000 days. Over three years."
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EARTH TIME LAUNCH 13+ YEARS LATER GRACE TIME LAUNCH 3 YRS RELATIVITY IS WEIRD. Δt
INSERT DIAGRAM — Two timelines: Earth (13+ yrs) vs Grace (3 yrs). Time dilation visualized.
INSERT DIAGRAMEXISTENTIAL SCALE
"At least thirteen years have passed on Earth. Even if I find a solution now — 26 years total."
III
GRIEF FOR YÁO AND ILYUKHINA
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YÁO ILYUKHINA
EXTREME CLOSE-UP — Tear tracks on face. Names surface below: Yáo. Ilyukhina.
ECUGRIEFGRACE
"I only notice the tears when the first one drops." Memory of friends he cannot remember — but the loss is real.
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ALONE — 12 LIGHT YEARS FROM EARTH — WILL DIE HERE
EXTREME WIDE — Hail Mary a speck in vast black. Tau Ceti distant right. Overwhelming isolation.
EXTREME WIDECRUSHING SOLITUDEGRACE
"I'll die out here too. Unlike them — I'll die alone." The chapter's emotional apex.
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shake it off
MEDIUM CLOSE — Wipes tears. Eyes shift from grief back to resolve. Set jaw returns.
MEDIUM CLOSEPUSH THROUGHGRACE
"I shake off their memory. My whole species is at stake." Grief acknowledged, then boxed away.
IV
THE LAB DISCOVERIES
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LAB PANEL — RESEARCH LAB — CENTER TABLE
MEDIUM WIDE — Grace leans over center lab table. Drawer pulled out: a glowing touchscreen inside.
MEDIUM WIDEDISCOVERYGRACE
"A touchscreen in a pull-out drawer. A fantastic find." Research-only system — separate from ship controls.
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SHIP LIBRARY ▸ Scientific Textbooks (all) ▸ All Published Papers ▸ Library of Congress (full) ▸ Reference Manuals ▸ Medical / Engineering Data ▸ Goat rectal temp: 103.4°F solid-state — weight negligible
INSERT — Library directory. Every scientific paper, textbook, Library of Congress. Even goat data.
INSERTABSURDIST COMFORT
"No reason to be stingy with information." All of human knowledge — with him, 12 light-years away.
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JOHN 5 TB PAUL 5 TB GEORGE 5 TB RINGO 5 TB BEETLE DATA DRIVES — 20 TB TOTAL
INSERT — Four external drives: John, Paul, George, Ringo. Each 5 TB free. Beetle payload storage.
INSERTHOPE / PURPOSE
"That's the beetles' data." When he finds the answer, these four will carry it back to Earth.
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BEETLES PANEL LAUNCH auto-navigate to Earth via star fixes
INSERT — Beetles control panel. Four beetle silhouettes. One large green LAUNCH button.
INSERTLIFELINE TO EARTH
"They orient via stars, head toward Earth on their own." No human targeting needed. Elegant design.
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EXT. COLLECTION UNIT bow stern [ angle controls ] ? Noted.
INSERT — ECU screen: a featureless rectangle with bow/stern open controls. Completely mysterious.
INSERTBEMUSED
"Okay. Noted. Not sure what to do with that." Classic Grace: cataloguing the unknown, moving on.
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EVA MANAGEMENT TETHER TRACKS O2 PRESSURE operator-managed from control room
INSERT — EVA screen: spacesuit diagram, tether tracks on hull, operator-managed from control room.
INSERTFUTURE NEED
"They figured an EVA would be important. Probably to collect local Astrophage." If there is any.
V
WAITING FOR ENGINE CUTOFF
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DAY 1 reading DAY 2 cataloguing DAY 3 fidgeting DAYS 4–5 worrying 00:00:12 COUNTING DOWN
MONTAGE — Five waiting days: reading, cataloguing, fidgeting, worrying. Countdown ticking.
MONTAGETENSE PATIENCEGRACE
"The next several days are an exercise in patience." He learns the ship. He waits.
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00:04 ENGINE CUTOFF "You are NOT falling. You will not be in danger."
MEDIUM — Grace in pilot chair, countdown at 4 seconds, talking himself through the zero-g fear.
MEDIUMBRACING FOR IMPACTGRACE
"I don't like roller coasters or water slides. That dropping sensation." He knows what's coming.
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BEFORE — SPIN DRIVE ACTIVE 1.5g DECELERATION AFTER — ENGINE CUTOFF [dark] ZERO GRAVITY — OBJECTS DRIFT FREE
WIDE SPLIT — Before: engine blazing, 1.5g. After: engine dark, objects beginning to float free.
WIDE SPLITTHRESHOLD MOMENT
"Right on schedule the engines shut off. The 1.5 g's vanishes." Everything changes instantly.
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I'M NOT FALLING!
MEDIUM — Grace curled in fetal position, floating in control room. Screaming. Debris drifts free.
MEDIUMPANIC / DARK COMEDYGRACE
"I straight-up panic. No mental prep would have worked." A scientist reduced to animal fear.
30
"Oh gosh..."
CLOSE-UP — Grace vomiting into his open collar. Grimace of pain/disgust. Darkly comic.
CLOSE-UPVISCERAL COMEDYGRACE
"Puke in zero-g is not okay. I tilt my head down just in time." Contained. Barely.
VI
CONQUERING ZERO-G
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CLENCH EVERYTHING
MEDIUM — Grace rigid in zero-g, fists clenched, jaw locked, every muscle contracted. Floating.
MEDIUMWILLPOWERGRACE
"I clench my teeth. My fists. My butt. Every part I know how to clench." Control through stillness.
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PANIC ANXIETY
CLOSE-UP — Face shifting. Eyes still wide but no longer screaming. Panic → anxiety gradient.
CLOSE-UPFEAR RECEDINGGRACE
"The panic begins to ebb. Human brains are amazing — we get used to anything."
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"warm vomit squishing" — needs change
MEDIUM CLOSE — Stained jumpsuit front. Disgust. Hands holding fabric away from body.
MEDIUM CLOSEGRIM PRAGMATISMGRACE
"The feeling of warm vomit squishing. I need to change." Survival is often unglamorous.
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"Dummy" — left everything out
WIDE — Lab in zero-g chaos. Everything Grace left out now floats freely. Items everywhere.
WIDECOMEDIC CHAOSGRACE
"The whole lab is cluttered with random floating debris." He left things out when cataloguing. Dummy.
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"Clean me!" [arms do nothing]
MEDIUM — Grace holds out soiled jumpsuit toward idle NannyBot arms. Arms: unresponsive.
MEDIUMABSURDISTGRACE + NANNYBOT
"Clean me!" The arms do nothing. Some commands outside NannyBot's vocabulary.
36
"Laundry?" [works]
MEDIUM — Ceiling panel slides open. NannyBot arm lifts soiled jumpsuit into laundry slot above.
MEDIUMSMALL RELIEFGRACE + NANNYBOT
"Laundry?" The magic word. Arms snatch it, ceiling panel opens, jumpsuit disappears. Elegant.
37
YÁO'S
MEDIUM — Grace wrestles Yáo's jumpsuit on in zero-g. Name patch "姚" visible. Leg floats sideways.
MEDIUMBITTERSWEET COMEDYGRACE
"Putting on clothes in zero-g is interesting. It's Yáo's. Not too tight." A quiet tribute.
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ATTEMPT — MISS CEILING ATTEMPT 2 — SUCCESS "pretty fun"
WIDE SPLIT — Left: launches toward hatch, crashes into ceiling instead. Right: slower second attempt, glides through cleanly.
WIDE SPLITSLAPSTICK → TRIUMPHGRACE
"I crash into the ceiling. Ow. I try again more slowly — I'm successful. This is pretty fun."
VII
THE PETROVASCOPE AWAKENS
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strapping in — stay on chair
MEDIUM — Grace pulls himself into pilot chair, strapping in to prevent floating away. Leaning forward with excitement.
MEDIUMANTICIPATIONGRACE
"I pull myself into the pilot's chair and strap in to keep from floating away." Time to use the Petrovascope.
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PETROVASCOPE ACTIVE VISIBLE PETROVA can pan / zoom / rotate
INSERT — Petrovascope now active. Visible-light mode: stars scattered on dark field. Toggle switch bottom.
INSERTWORKING AT LAST
"The Petrovascope screen says READY." Engine off — the instrument can finally function.
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swiping left... left... left... TAU CETI (occluded)
INSERT — Swiping the Petrovascope left across star field. Tau Ceti appears: a black disc with corona ring.
INSERTSEARCHING
"I swipe left left left until I find Tau Ceti — a solid black circle. Metal plate protects the sensors. Good design."
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VISIBLE PETROVA "If there's no Petrova line... I don't know what to do."
INSERT CLOSE — Finger hovering over PETROVA toggle. Tau Ceti visible above. The pivotal moment.
INSERT CLOSEDREAD / HOPEGRACE
"If there's no Petrova line here, I don't know what to do. I'll try to figure something out. But I'll be lost."
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PETROVASCOPE — PETROVA MODE PETROVA LINE — ASTROPHAGE MIGRATION PATH
EXTREME WIDE — Petrova mode activated. Tau Ceti: black disc. From its lower arc: a deep red line curves into space.
EXTREME WIDEREVELATIONGRACE
"A beautiful dark-red arch coming out of the bottom-left portion of Tau Ceti. It's a Petrova line!"
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"Yes!"
MEDIUM — Grace pumps fists, arms raised in chair. Doing a "wiggly dance." Pure uncontained joy.
MEDIUMELATIONGRACE
"I clap my hands. YES! I do a wiggly little dance in my chair. It's not easy in zero-g but I give it my all."
45
Which planet? Sample local Astrophage EVA into Petrova line Compare Earth strain? Less virulent strain? Magnetic field?
MEDIUM — Grace surrounded by floating idea-cards. A mind exploding with next steps.
MEDIUMSCIENTIFIC FRENZYGRACE
"There are so many experiments I'll need to do, I don't even know where to begin!"
VIII
THE MYSTERY LIGHT
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PETROVA MODE FLASH intermittent "What's that? Another clue?"
INSERT — Petrovascope Petrova mode. Petrova line visible. A sudden bright flash appears upper-right.
INSERTMYSTERY BEGINS
"A flash on the screen. Just a quick blip of light. Nowhere near the Petrova line." What is that?
47
PETROVA MODE — 1 MIN LATER STEADY growing brighter Theory: Astrophage attracted to engine IR wavelength?
INSERT — Flash has become a steady, growing light source. Grace's theory floats below: Astrophage attracted to engine?
INSERTDEEPENING MYSTERY
"The light source becomes brighter. Is it an object headed toward me?" First hypothesis forms.
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+1 min +2 min [gone] +3 min "Huh." waits. does not return.
INSERT TRIPTYCH — Light grows bright over 2 minutes, then vanishes completely. Grace: "Huh."
INSERT TRIPTYCHUNSETTLING
"Brighter, brighter, brighter — then disappears. I wait. It doesn't return." Nothing to do about it yet.
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PETROVA MODE — SOMETHING WRONG CUT OFF like an X-Acto knife "What is going on?"
INSERT — Petrovascope: Petrova line now severed mid-frame. The second half simply gone. Clean cut.
INSERTWRONG / ALARMING
"Half of the Petrova line is just gone. Like someone took an X-Acto knife to it." Physics doesn't do this.
50
ZOOMING IN — CUTOFF REGION void Theory: debris on camera lens? blob of Astrophage on hull?
INSERT CLOSE — Zoomed in on cutoff point. Perfectly straight vertical edge. Grace's debris theory noted below.
INSERT CLOSEIMPOSSIBLE GEOMETRY
"A straight line — like an X-Acto knife. Maybe something blocking the lens?" Reaching for any explanation.
IX
THE ALIEN SHIP
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PETROVA VISIBLE switching to visible light maybe a reflective asteroid?
INSERT — Finger presses VISIBLE toggle. Switching modes. Building tension. Last normal moment.
INSERTBUILDING DREADGRACE
"Maybe a visible-light view will give me a better idea of what's going on." The switch that changes everything.
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FABRICATED lines too straight too smooth ~few hundred meters away
EXTREME WIDE — Visible light reveals it: a massive triangular craft, flat surfaces, gable protrusions. Not natural. A ship.
EXTREME WIDEFIRST CONTACTALIEN CRAFT
"The lines are too smooth. Too straight. This object was made. Fabricated. Constructed." Not any human design.
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EXTREME CLOSE-UP — Grace's face: jaw dropped, eyes maximally wide. Screen glow on face. Frozen.
ECUSHOCK / AWEGRACE
"There's another ship in this system with me." The most important moment in human history. He can barely breathe.
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FLAT SURFACES worst pressure vessel ASTROPHAGE-POWERED same engine type NO HUMAN WOULD BUILD THIS
INSERT — Alien ship analysis: flat surface annotations, pressure-vessel logic violated. Same engine type as Hail Mary.
INSERT ANALYSISSCIENTIFIC PROCESSING
"Huge flat surfaces — the worst possible way to make a pressure vessel. No one on Earth would. No one on Earth."
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MYSTERY FLASHES flash 1 growing vanished ALIEN ENGINE BURN = same IR wavelength
INSERT SPLIT — Mystery flashes = alien ship engine burns. Astrophage propulsion. Same wavelength. Equals sign.
INSERT SPLITPIECES CLICKING
"Those flashes of light — those were its engines. Astrophage-powered. Just like the Hail Mary."
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EARTH 12 light-years SOMEWHERE FIRST CONTACT TAU CETI — 12 LIGHT-YEARS FROM HOME
CONCEPTUAL WIDE — Earth far left, unknown alien world far right. Two ships meeting at center. "First Contact."
CONCEPTUAL WIDEEPOCHAL
"Humanity isn't alone in the universe. And I've just met our neighbors." The weight of history.
X
FLASHBACK: STRATT'S VAT
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FLASHBACK — STRATT'S VAT — SOUTH CHINA SEA
WIDE — Flashback tint (blue-grey). Aircraft carrier on calm South China Sea. Establishing shot.
WIDEWARM MEMORY / CONTRAST
"Stratt's Vat. The People's Liberation Army Navy Gansu. We wandered the South China Sea."
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ASTROPHAGE BREEDER — PROTOTYPE v1 — FEW μg/hr
MEDIUM WIDE — The 30-foot breeder prototype. Ugly control boxes welded everywhere. Engineers at sides.
MEDIUM WIDEINDUSTRIAL / HOPEFUL
"Not much to look at — a metal pipe with ugly controls. But it worked. The concept was solid."
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STRATT — ALONE — GIN — HASN'T SLEPT
MEDIUM WIDE — Conference room. Stratt alone at head of table. Charts everywhere, gin bottle beside her.
MEDIUM WIDEBURDEN OF COMMANDSTRATT
"She looked up. Her eyes had bags. She hadn't slept." First time Grace has seen her drink.
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"I have to make a decision."
TWO-SHOT — Stratt exhausted at head of table. Grace across from her. Stratt: "I have to make a decision."
TWO-SHOTGRAVITY / TRUSTSTRATT + GRACE
"How can I help?" "It's not easy." The rarest of moments: Stratt vulnerable, asking for something.
XI
FLASHBACK: THE COMA PROBLEM
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MINIMUM COMA: 4 YEARS 1-IN-3 MORTALITY at current Astrophage exposure levels FLASHBACK — STRATT'S VAT
MEDIUM — Stratt at whiteboard. Stats written large: "Minimum coma: 4 years" / "1-in-3 mortality."
MEDIUMCOLD MATHEMATICSSTRATT
"The coma protocol alone kills one in three. We need crew who can survive a four-year sleep."
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USSR — CLASSIFIED — 1971 DECLASSIFIED
INSERT — Archival/declassified Soviet-era document feel. Crude metal coma cylinder, 1971. A comatose subject inside.
INSERT ARCHIVALCOLD WAR SHADOW
"The Soviets experimented on long-term coma in the sixties and seventies. The data still exists."
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COMA-RESISTANT GENOTYPE 1 : 7,000 people carry this marker identified via Soviet data analysis ~1 million people on Earth have it
INSERT DIAGRAM — DNA strand. One highlighted rung. Ratio displayed: 1 in 7,000. The marker.
INSERT DIAGRAMLOTTERY OF BIOLOGY
"One specific genetic marker. Only one in seven thousand people have it. They survive long comas."
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GLOBAL GENETIC SCREENING COVERT — DISGUISED AS "ROUTINE HEALTH SURVEYS" BLOOD VAL PROCESSING FOUND millions of samples processed globally
WIDE SPLIT — Left: world map with covert test sites lit up. Right: blood-vial processing line, one vial glowing gold.
WIDE SPLITCOLD LOGISTICSSTRATT OPERATION
"Disguised as routine health surveys. Millions tested. They needed to find the ones who could survive."
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YÁO ILYUKHINA GRACE CREW SELECTION REQUIREMENT all three must carry the coma-resistance marker
MEDIUM — Three crew silhouettes: Yáo, Ilyukhina, Grace. Each marked with a gold checkmark. All confirmed.
MEDIUMSELECTION / FATEYÁO + ILYUKHINA + GRACE
"All three crew members must have the marker. You don't get to volunteer — you get found."
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"You had my blood tested without my knowledge?"
MEDIUM — Grace pointing accusatorially. Stratt unmoved. Speech: "You had my blood tested without my knowledge?"
MEDIUMOUTRAGE / DRY COMEDYGRACE + STRATT
"Routine health survey, hm?" Grace starting to piece together how long he'd been watched.
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"Yes." "Does that bother you?"
MEDIUM — Stratt shrugs. Palms out. Zero remorse. Speech: "Yes." / "Does that bother you?"
MEDIUMSTRATT IS STRATTSTRATT
"Yes." A one-word answer that contains an entire philosophy of pragmatic ruthlessness. No apology forthcoming.
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"Kind of? I mean... it is what it is." the scientist in him understands
MEDIUM — Grace head-tilt, one eyebrow up. Scratching head. Half-smile escaping. "Kind of? I mean… it is what it is."
MEDIUMRESIGNED HUMORGRACE
"The outrage deflates. He's a scientist. He'd have done the same." Stratt has that effect on people.
XII
FLASHBACK: THE DECISION
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"There's something I have to tell you."
CLOSE-UP — Stratt's face unusually unguarded. Gin in hand. Speech: "There's something I have to tell you."
CLOSE-UPDREAD / WEIGHTSTRATT
"Stratt never softens anything. The fact that she's pacing herself means this is very bad."
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MISSION PROFILE EARTH TAU CETI ONE WAY not enough fuel for return journey
INSERT DIAGRAM — Mission profile: single arrow Earth → Tau Ceti. Red X on the return path. "ONE WAY."
INSERT DIAGRAMSENTENCE OF DEATH
"There's no return trip. The mission requires all the fuel just to get there." The thing Grace already knew but hadn't heard said.
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"I know." — he'd suspected
CLOSE-UP — Grace's face: still, absorbing it. Not shocked. Eyes direct. A slow breath. "I know."
CLOSE-UPACCEPTANCEGRACE
"I'd wondered. The math never quite worked for a return trip. I'd wondered and then stopped wondering."
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"I'll do it. I volunteer. Tell me what you need." [surprised for once] FLASHBACK — STRATT'S VAT — THE MOMENT GRACE CHOSE
WIDE — Conference room. Grace stands, hand flat on table. Stratt across. Grace: "I'll do it. I volunteer. Tell me what you need."
WIDETHE DECISIONGRACE + STRATT
"That fast. He doesn't pace. He doesn't ask for a night to think. He knew the moment she laid it out." Stratt nearly blinks.
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"Why?"
CLOSE-UP — Stratt's face, slightly tilted. Genuine curiosity. Speech: "Why?" — biggest word in the room.
CLOSE-UPRARE VULNERABILITYSTRATT
"She never asks why. She's asking why." The question is almost tender. She needs to understand him.
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"Because I'm a scientist. And this is the mission."
CLOSE-UP — Grace: settled, certain eyes. Speech: "Because I'm a scientist. And this is the mission."
CLOSE-UPQUIET HEROISMGRACE
"No speech. No drama. Just: this is what I do. This is what I am." The purest version of himself.
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[she nods] once. just once.
CLOSE-UP — Stratt's face: the rarest expression. Eyes soft for a moment. A single nod. No words needed.
CLOSE-UPGRATITUDE / HUMANITYSTRATT
"She nods. Just once. The closest she'll come to saying: thank you. And: I'm sorry." A universe in a gesture.
XIII
RETURN TO PRESENT
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PRESENT — CONTROL ROOM — TAU CETI
MEDIUM — Flashback dissolve: blue-grey tint recedes, control room materializes. Grace in pilot chair, blinking back to now.
MEDIUM DISSOLVERETURN TO PRESENTGRACE
"The memory fades. He's back. Strapped into the pilot's chair. Petrovascope still on."
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VISIBLE LIGHT MODE still there
INSERT — Petrovascope visible mode. The alien ship: still there. Unchanged. Real. Grace's face reflected below it.
INSERTCONFIRMATION
"Still there. Still the same. Not a glitch. Not a dream. The most important thing humanity has ever encountered."
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PETROVA LINE ALIEN CRAFT CHOSE THIS
MEDIUM — Grace's face center, three floating memory-icons: Petrova line, alien craft, the volunteer moment.
MEDIUM CONCEPTUALINTEGRATIONGRACE
"He holds all three at once: he found the line, he found alien life, and he chose to be here. It all converges."
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MEDIUM — Grace unclips belt, drifts forward toward the screen showing the alien ship. Reaching instinctively.
MEDIUMDRAWN FORWARDGRACE
"He unstraps. Floats toward the screen. Drawn to it like something magnetic. He can't look away."
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EXTREME CLOSE — Alien ship fills the screen. Grace's hands press to both sides of the display. Nose-to-screen.
ECUWONDER / VERTIGOGRACE
"He presses his hands to the screen as if he could touch it. As if the glass is the only thing between them."
XIV
THE CHAPTER'S END
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SITUATION ASSESSMENT ✓ Petrova line confirmed at Tau Ceti ✓ Local Astrophage accessible (EVA) ✓ Ship systems nominal ? Alien vessel — intentions unknown ✗ No way home either way scientist mode: categorize, then act
INSERT — Situation assessment card. Three green checks, one unknown, one red cross. The full picture.
INSERTSCIENTIFIC ORDER
"He defaults to what he knows how to do: make a list. Categorize. Find the edge of the known." His coping mechanism.
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STATIONARY — HOLDING POSITION
INSERT — Alien ship on Petrovascope. Position arrows blocked with Xs in all directions. It is holding still.
INSERTPATIENT MYSTERY
"It's not approaching. Not retreating. Holding position. Watching? Waiting? Same as him." A standoff across the void.
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THROUGH THE GLASS
MEDIUM — Looking out Hail Mary's window. Alien ship small in distance. Grace's ghostly reflection on the glass.
MEDIUM POVFACE TO FACE WITH HISTORYGRACE
"He looks at it the way you look at a mirror you've never seen before. Who is on the other side?"
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HAIL MARY UNKNOWN ~few hundred meters ALONE = ALONE
EXTREME WIDE — Both ships in frame, equidistant, same scale. Hail Mary left, Unknown right. Silence between.
EXTREME WIDESYMMETRY / WONDER
"Two ships. Both alone. Both a long way from home. Both here for the same star." A mirror image across the species divide.
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EXTREME CLOSE-UP — Grace's face: beyond shock, beyond joy. Awe settling into something nameless. Two light sources.
ECUBEYOND WORDSGRACE
"There is no human word for what he's feeling. He's the first person in history to feel it." Two lights on his face.
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GRACE YÁO ILYUKHINA
WIDE — Dormitory. Grace's pod lit softly. Yáo's and Ilyukhina's pods: dark, empty. Names barely visible.
WIDEGRIEF / WITNESSGRACE / YÁO / ILYUKHINA
"They should have seen this. They died for this. He will see it for all three of them." Witness by proxy.
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HAIL MARY UNKNOWN PETROVA LINE EVERYTHING — IN ONE FRAME
WIDE — Everything together: Tau Ceti, Petrova line arcing down, Hail Mary, alien ship on the line. The full picture.
WIDE OVERVIEWCONVERGENCE
"The alien ship is on the Petrova line. Both ships are here because of Astrophage. Both here for the same star. Same reason."
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"Holy fucking shit." "Holy fucking shit."
EXTREME WIDE — Grace tiny before the screen. Alien ship fills the display. One hand touching the glass. Final words below.
EXTREME WIDEEND OF CHAPTERGRACE
"Holy fucking shit." — The last line of Chapter 6. Three words that contain everything.
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