CHAPTER 9

Project Hail Mary — Fan Storyboard

59 PANELS 4 ACTS AUTHOR: ANDY WEIR
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I
THE DECISION & THE HULL SAMPLE
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MEDIUM — Xenonite docking model floats free in zero-g. Ryland in background, arms crossed, staring at it.
MEDIUMCONTEMPLATIVERYLAND
"I let the model float in the middle of the room." The chapter opens mid-decision: go meet them, or not?
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SAVE HUMANITY vs STRANGER + CANDY
WIDE SPLIT — Left: Earth / save humanity. Right: alien offering "candy" (information). The impossible calculus.
WIDE SPLITETHICAL TENSION
"This is the interstellar equivalent of a stranger offering me candy." Risk vs. potential mission-saving reward.
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NO-BRAINER.
CLOSE-UP — Ryland: calm, resolved face. The internal debate ends. He will meet them.
CLOSE-UPDECISIVERYLAND
"No, this is a no-brainer. I have to talk to them." Mission logic wins. This is who Grace is.
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ERIDIAN POV ? "humanium"? need hull sample
DIAGRAM — Eridian POV: Blip-A looks at Hail Mary with "?" What is it made of? A hull sample is needed.
DIAGRAM INSERTDEDUCTIVE LOGIC
"I'm an Eridian. I want to build a tunnel…but how do I connect it to 'humanium'?" Grace thinks for his alien counterpart.
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17C 17D 17E
MEDIUM — Lab. Drawer 17E pulled open. EVA tool belt with hammer and chisel. Hand reaching in.
MEDIUMPREPARATIONRYLAND
"Drawer 17E. They live in the lab." Brief flash of Ilyukhina — the engineer who should be doing this.
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AFT BLIP-A (watching)
EXTREME WIDE — Ryland in EVA suit crawls aft along hull, one tether at a time. Blip-A watches from above.
EXTREME WIDEMETHODICAL / EXPOSEDRYLAND
"One tether adjustment at a time." While crawling, his mind wanders to what a tunnel could even mean…
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>100°C I WAS RIGHT! goldilocks = bull-puckey
MEDIUM + THOUGHT — Ryland on hull, thought bubble: boiling pot, ">100°C." Triumphant mid-EVA realisation.
MEDIUMDRY TRIUMPHRYLAND
"I was right! The goldilocks zone is bull-puckey!" He can't help being pleased with himself mid-crisis.
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pressurized zone ends HERE empty astrophage tank below breach = safe
MEDIUM — Hull, aft section. Ryland identifies the spot above the empty Astrophage tank. Circle marks the target.
MEDIUMMETHODICALRYLAND
"I'm standing on a big empty tank. If I breach the hull here, it shouldn't matter." The logic is sound.
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notable dent — outermost layer thin
CLOSE-UP — Chisel on hull, hammer raised. Impact: dent forms easily. Hull's outer layer is thin.
CLOSE-UPMETHODICAL
"One corner of the chisel and a little tap. There's a notable dent." Easier than expected.
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6-inch circle foam beneath
TOP-DOWN — 6-inch circle nearly traced in hull. Foam insulation visible in the kerf. Chisel at the last arc.
TOP-DOWNSURGICAL
"A layer of something underneath — probably insulation." Hull is a sandwich: metal + foam.
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SHOOT!
EXTREME WIDE — Hull chunk flies off into space. "SHOOT!" Ryland leaps after it. Tether snaps taut mid-air.
EXTREME WIDESUDDEN CRISIS / COMEDYRYLAND
"The underlayer gives way suddenly. The hull sample flies off into space." Then the leap — pure instinct.
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tether at max thinking about how dumb I am...
CLOSE-UP — Fingertips barely catch the hull disc. Tether snaps taut below. Breathing hard. "Thinking about how dumb I am."
CLOSE-UPRELIEF / SELF-DEPRECATIONRYLAND
"I get a hand on the circle right before my tether snaps tight." He caught it. Barely.
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outer hull — aluminum foam — "styrofoam, maybe. probably more complex."
INSERT — Hull chunk: shiny aluminum top / foam underside. Two-layer construction revealed.
INSERTSCIENTIFIC CURIOSITY
"A light foam substance on the underside. Styrofoam, maybe. Probably something more complicated."
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"I hope you guys watched all that."
MEDIUM — Ryland on hull, throws chunk toward Blip-A. Full throwing motion. "I hope you guys watched all that."
MEDIUMDRY HUMOUR / RESOLVERYLAND
"Because I'm not doing it again." By performing it right in front of them, they'll know it's a hull sample.
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IT WAVES!
MEDIUM — Blip-A hull robot: perfect catch with one arm. Another arm waves at Ryland. "I swear to God."
MEDIUMDELIGHT / WONDER
"The robot makes a perfect catch. And then — it waves at me!" The first mutual gesture between species.
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this could go on all day. YOUR MOVE, GUYS.
WIDE — Ryland waves. Robot waves back. Arrows show the exchange looping. "This could go on all day."
WIDEDRY COMEDY / WARMTHRYLAND + ROBOT
"I wave back. It waves again. Okay, this could go on all day." Heads back to airlock. "Your move, guys."
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NO ACTIVITY NO ACTIVITY bored.
MEDIUM — Ryland slumped in pilot seat. Both screens blank. Half-lidded bored eyes. Nothing happening.
MEDIUMDEADPAN BOREDOMRYLAND
"Their move is taking a long time and I'm bored." At Tau Ceti. Waiting for aliens. Still somehow bored.
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RADAR — PROXIMITY ALERT CURRENT: 100 km NEW: 0.26 km Blip-A @ 0.271 km — just outside the wire
INSERT — Radar panel. Old: 100 km (crossed out). New: 0.26 km. Blip-A at 0.271 km, barely outside threshold.
SCREEN INSERTCLEVER ENGINEERING
"If they get closer than 260 metres the alert goes off. I don't have to sit here staring anymore."
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DAY 10 MEAL 1
MEDIUM — Dormitory. Robot arm delivers "DAY 10 MEAL 1" box to bunk. Ryland floats down to it.
MEDIUMMUNDANE / COMIC RELIEFRYLAND
"Food," I say. The arms comply. Normalcy against the extraordinary. He opens the box to find: a burrito.
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cheese bubbles steam in all directions
MEDIUM — Lab. Burrito in sample furnace on tongs. Cheese bubbling. Steam emanating in zero-g sphere.
MEDIUMCOMIC DOMESTICITYRYLAND
"I put the burrito in the sample furnace." The improvised solution. Then: a memory intrudes mid-bite…
II
THE SPIN DRIVE FLASHBACK
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VACUUM CHAMBER WELCOME TO LITTLE RUSSIA!
WIDE / FLASHBACK — Aircraft carrier hangar deck. Dozens of scientists. Huge vacuum chamber centre. Dimitri arms wide.
WIDEFLASHBACK / WARMTHDIMITRI / STRATT / RYLAND
Memory triggered mid-burrito. "Welcome to Little Russia!" — Dimitri's domain aboard the carrier.
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2g = 95 billion cells
CLOSE-UP / FLASHBACK — Ryland hugs vial to chest. Stratt's hand reaching. "I'm not happy with this."
CLOSE-UPFLASHBACK / COMIC PROTECTIVENESSRYLAND
"Two grams may not seem like much, but it's ninety-five billion Astrophage cells." Classic Grace hoarding.
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THIS IS SPIN DRIVE.
WIDE / FLASHBACK — Inside vacuum chamber. Spin drive on table: circular, one side cut flat. Dimitri beams.
WIDEFLASHBACK / TECHNICAL AWEDIMITRI
"This is spin drive." Wasn't much to look at. Then Dimitri lifted the casing…
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FUELING THRUST CLEAN 120 rotation — 3 zones always active
DIAGRAM / FLASHBACK — Spin drive cross-section. Triangle revolver: FUEL / THRUST / CLEAN zones, rotation arrow.
DIAGRAMFLASHBACK / TECHNICAL
Pipelining: three faces always active simultaneously. Dim IR attracts, bright IR fires. "Millions of Astrophages pushing."
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MEDIUM / FLASHBACK — Dimitri beaming, tips vial into fueling chamber. Ryland right: pained squint.
MEDIUMFLASHBACK / COMIC ANGUISHDIMITRI / RYLAND
"Dimitri opened my vial and set it in the fueling chamber." Grace's most prized resource, casually poured in.
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ТЕЯГА: 300 km from land — "this is good."
WIDE / FLASHBACK — All pressed to far wall. Cyrillic laptop on folding table. Chamber sealed. Dimitri at button.
WIDEFLASHBACK / DREAD
"Why is 300 km from land good?" Dimitri: "It is…good. Time for science!" He pushed the button.
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60,000 N maintained 100 μs 60,000 ньютонов!
MEDIUM / FLASHBACK — Screen: 60,000 N. Dimitri fist-pumps. Russians cheer. "60,000 ньютонов!"
MEDIUMFLASHBACK / TRIUMPHDIMITRI
"Sixty thousand Newtons! Maintained for one hundred microseconds!" Grace is stunned silent.
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CAM FEED — VACUUM INT. 1,000 kg silicon — now liquid E=mc squared — very powerful stuff
SCREEN INSERT / FLASHBACK — Camera feed: 1-tonne silicon plate melted to a glowing blob. In 100 microseconds.
SCREEN INSERTFLASHBACK / AWE + TERROR
"1.8 billion Joules. The silicon absorbed it by melting." "Whoa." "That Mr. Einstein — very powerful stuff."
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SIXTY THOUSAND?!
CLOSE-UP / FLASHBACK — Ryland: jaw hanging, eyes enormous. "Did you say sixty thousand Newtons?!"
CLOSE-UPFLASHBACK / PURE AWERYLAND
From 20 micrograms. He gave them 2 entire grams. "Can I have the rest back, please?"
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FWOOSH! "I owe you drink in afterlife! Ha-ha-ha!"
MEDIUM / FLASHBACK — Dimitri: huge grin, shrug. "Fwoosh! We are vapor — carrier too. But 300 km from land, so okay!"
MEDIUMFLASHBACK / DARK COMEDYDIMITRI
"He slapped me on the back. 'I owe you drink in afterlife, yes?! Ha-ha-ha!'" Perfectly Dimitri.
III
BLIP-A APPROACHES, DOCKING
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spin drive demo fading... "Huh. So that's how the spin drive works." I munch on my burrito.
WIDE — Flashback fades left. Present right: Ryland floating, munching burrito. "Huh. So that's how the spin drive works."
WIDE / TRANSITIONWRY COMEDY / RETURN TO PRESENTRYLAND
Memory resolved. "A thousand and nine!" — Dimitri's voice. Then: the proximity alert blares.
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ALERT! PROXIMITY FINALLY!
MEDIUM — Proximity alert rings. Ryland launches upward mid-bite. Burrito drifts. "FINALLY!"
MEDIUMSUDDEN ENERGYRYLAND
"I drop the burrito and launch myself up to the control room." Even the diagonal shortcut doesn't work this time.
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RADAR BLIP-A WHOLE SHIP slow — nice and slow nonthreatening approach?
SCREEN INSERT — Radar: Blip-A whole ship moving toward Hail Mary. Slow, steady. Approach vector confirmed.
SCREEN INSERTESCALATING TENSION
"The Blip-A is approaching. Not a cylinder this time. The whole ship is coming my way. Nice and slow."
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TELESCOPE xenonite tunnel!
SCREEN INSERT — Telescope: Blip-A hull close-up. Xenonite tube newly added. Hull robot beside it, "looking proud."
SCREEN INSERTWONDER / TENSION
"A cylindrical tube sticking straight up. Patchy gray and tan xenonite. Looks hollow." The tunnel is ready.
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record time better safe than sorry
MEDIUM — Ryland rushes to EVA suit at airlock. Motion blur lines. "Record time. Better safe than sorry."
MEDIUMURGENT / INSTINCTIVERYLAND
"What if they miscalculate? Will an alien math error doom my entire species?" Suit up. Just in case.
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five telescoping arms — reaching for my front door
EXTREME WIDE — Blip-A looms huge beside tiny Hail Mary. Five telescoping robot arms reach across gap toward airlock.
EXTREME WIDESCALE / UNEASE
"Five ever-growing alien robot arms reaching for my front door. Not creepy at all. No cause for alarm."
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HULL CAM — EXTERNAL adhesive — not mechanical. of course.
SCREEN INSERT — Hull cam: three "coffee-mug handle" devices stuck to Hail Mary hull via xenonite adhesive.
SCREEN INSERTENGINEERING INSIGHT
"My hull is nonmagnetic aluminum. Must be adhesive. Of course. Much simpler than docking protocols."
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100,000 kg pulled by airlock groan. a few cm/s — scary stuff over there
MEDIUM — Ship groans. Ryland presses against far wall, checks EVA seals. A few cm/s movement toward tunnel.
MEDIUMTENSE / UNEASYRYLAND
"My ship groans. 100,000 kg not designed to be pulled by its airlock." He double-checks the seals.
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CLUNK. clicks. scrapes.
SOUND PANEL — "CLUNK." Shockwave rings from contact point. clicks. scrapes. The tunnel is attached.
INSERT / SOUNDIMPACT / THRESHOLD
"Clunk. The Eridian tunnel has hit the hull. Clicks and scrapes follow." Contact made. No going back.
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HULL CAM — AIRLOCK VIEW AIRLOCK DOOR tunnel bigger than airlock — curvature matched perfectly
SCREEN INSERT — Hull cam: tunnel mouth (large) surrounds smaller airlock circle. Hull curvature duplicated exactly.
SCREEN INSERTERIDIAN PRECISION / AWE
"The mouth is larger than the entire airlock door. Kind of complicated shape — but they duplicated it perfectly."
IV
THE TUNNEL, FIRST CONTACT
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WHOOSH. they are pressurizing the tunnel!
POV MEDIUM — Through airlock porthole: dark tunnel, air-flow lines rushing in, orange heat glow from Eridian end.
MEDIUM / POVALARM / WONDER
"A muffled whooshing sound from the airlock. They're pressurizing the tunnel! My heart races."
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what if air dissolves Al? Al toxic to Eridians? will hull hold pressure? glue composition??? TERRIBLE IDEA!
CLOSE-UP — Ryland: wide panicked eyes, sweat, fears spiralling around his head. "This is a terrible idea!"
CLOSE-UPSPIRAL PANICRYLAND
"What if their air dissolves aluminum? What if aluminum kills Eridians instantly?" Classic Grace worst-case cascade.
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silence. I gulp. nothing dissolved yet.
CLOSE-UP — Whooshing stops. Silence. Ryland: tight eyes, throat bob. "I gulp. Nothing dissolved yet."
CLOSE-UPSUSPENDED DREADRYLAND
"The whooshing stops. I gulp. They're done. Nothing dissolved yet." The seal holds. The tunnel is sealed.
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dark tunnel beyond
MEDIUM — Ryland inside airlock, helmet lamps on. Porthole: space replaced by dark tunnel. He angles his head.
MEDIUMLIMINAL / CURIOUSRYLAND
"The blackness of space gone, replaced with the blackness of a dark tunnel." He turns on helmet lamps.
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10ft not 20ft CLEVER.
WIDE — Tunnel interior. Xenonite walls. At far end — much closer than expected — a hexagonal wall of random colors.
WIDE / INTERIORAWE / REVELATION
"The end is only 10 feet away — not 20. The wall: hexagonal pattern of random colors. They connected airlock to airlock with a wall in the middle. Clever."
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VACUUM on my side "opens without resistance"
MEDIUM — Outer hatch handle spun, door swings open. "Tunnel is a vacuum — at least on my side of the divider."
MEDIUMCAUTIOUS PROGRESS
"I close the inner door with me inside, depressurize, spin the outer hatch. Opens without resistance. Vacuum."
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HAIL MARY AIR 400 hPa equalized — 3 min bypasses computer — safety first
DIAGRAM — Manual relief valve opened. Hail Mary air flows into tunnel. 3 minutes. 400 hPa. Equalized.
DIAGRAM INSERTMETHODICAL
"The manual relief valve bypasses all computer controls. Air rushes in. Within 3 minutes, 400 hectopascals outside."
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0 200 600 1000 400 hPa STEADY — GOOD SEAL
INSERT — EVA wrist gauge: needle steady at 400 hPa. No drop. "Eridians know their way around the periodic table."
INSERTRELIEF / RESPECT
"Pressure stays put at 400 hPa. We have a good seal. Of course they do — any species that invented xenonite knows their elements."
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NH3 strong "time for a leap of faith"
MEDIUM — Ryland climbs out of EVA suit. Pushes suit back toward airlock. Ammonia wafts. "Leap of faith."
MEDIUMCOURAGE / VULNERABILITYRYLAND
"I pop the seals and climb out the back. Strong ammonia smell — but breathable. My own air supply."
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suit propped in airlock — only light source
MEDIUM — Dark tunnel. EVA suit propped in airlock, helmet lamps forward. Ryland floating free, sweating in heat.
MEDIUMINTIMATE / TENSERYLAND
"Helmet lamps: my only source of light. I finagle the suit so lights stay pointed down the tunnel." Then: forward.
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feel heat from inches away Eridians like it hot.
MEDIUM — Ryland's hand reaches toward hex wall, stops short. Heat shimmer between hand and colourful wall.
MEDIUMALIEN ENVIRONMENTRYLAND
"I reach out to touch it but stop short. I can feel the heat even from a few inches away. Eridians like it hot."
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too curious not to press on. could anyone blame me?
CLOSE-UP — Eyes watering (ammonia), sweat on brow, squinting. Yet pressing on. "Too curious not to. Could anyone blame me?"
CLOSE-UPDISCOMFORT / IRREPRESSIBLE CURIOSITYRYLAND
"Even with sweat on my brow and ammonia making my eyes water, I press on." Grace at his most purely Grace.
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seams along hex edges 20+ hexagons — all different colors, textures, some translucent HEAT RADIATES THROUGH
WIDE INSERT — Hex wall close: 20+ hexagons, all different colours, textures, some translucent. Seams visible. Heat glowing through.
WIDE INSERTALIEN WONDER / SCIENTIFIC AWE
"At least twenty little hexagons — all different colors and textures. A couple might be translucent. Definite seams along the edges."
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cataloguing. curious. sweating.
MEDIUM — Ryland floating in front of hex wall, finger pointing at each hexagon, mentally cataloguing. Sweating. Fascinated.
MEDIUMSCIENTIFIC OBSESSIONRYLAND
"I should catalog each one and figure out if I can identify what they're made of." Scientist brain fully engaged.
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seam! seam! definite seam running along the edges
INSERT — Hex wall close-up: seams clearly visible at each hexagon edge. Separate panels. Removable? Openable?
INSERTREVELATION / BUILDING TENSION
"There's a definite seam running along the edges of the hexes." They aren't solid. They can open. That thought registers.
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MEDIUM — Ryland's face inches from hex wall. Eyes wide. Totally absorbed. Heat shimmer between face and wall. Sweat dripping.
MEDIUMPURE CURIOSITY / HEATRYLAND
The scientist is in. Ammonia, heat, sweat — none of it matters now. He's cataloguing hexagons with his eyes.
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knock. knock. knock.
SOUND PANEL — Vibration rings radiate LEFT from hex wall. Three times. "knock. knock. knock." From the other side.
INSERT / SOUNDCLIMAX — FIRST CONTACT
"That's when I hear a sound come from the other side: Knock, knock, knock." — The final line of the chapter.
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everything stops.
CLOSE-UP — Ryland frozen. Eyes wide and fixed on hex wall. Everything stops. The universe just changed.
CLOSE-UPPROFOUND STILLNESSRYLAND
No words needed. Someone just knocked. From the other side. An Eridian. Right there. Waiting.
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TAU CETI TUNNEL HAIL MARY BLIP-A knock. knock. knock. END OF CHAPTER 9
EXTREME WIDE — Both ships tiny in infinite black, connected by the tunnel. Tau Ceti glows. "knock. knock. knock." END OF CHAPTER 9.
EXTREME WIDECOSMIC SCALE / CHAPTER END
The chapter's final image: two civilisations, separated by a xenonite wall, 217 metres of tunnel, and all of evolution. One just knocked.
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