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Eridian Biology
CHAPTER 20
Project Hail Mary — Fan Storyboard
66 PANELS
6 ACTS
AUTHOR: ANDY WEIR
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I
AFTERMATH & THE CENTRIFUGE
1
MEDIUM — Rocky motionless on the airlock floor. Smoke gone. The glow is out. Ryland crouches at the xenonite wall.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
AFTERMATH
"Rocky's body has heated up the whole room. He hasn't moved."
2
MEDIUM — Ryland crawling across the floor, dragging himself to the control panel. Centrifuge gravity enormous.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
PINNED BY G-FORCE
"Nnnn!" Every centimetre costs everything he has.
3
CLOSE — Monitor showing: CENTRIFUGE SCREEN. Red/white alarm. Ryland's hand reaching for it.
CLOSE-UP
RYLAND
ONE CHANCE
"I've got one chance at this." Finger on the screen-select button.
4
r=20m
HIGH G
r=75m
1/14 G
INSERT — Centrifuge diagram: cable spools extend from 20m radius to 75m. Force drops to 1/14th.
INSERT
CENTRIFUGE MATH
Inverse square of radius. 20m → 75m. Force becomes one-fourteenth.
5
MEDIUM — Ryland at console, cable spool control active. Room begins tilting, spinning. He vomits.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
VESTIBULAR CHAOS
"My inner ears and my eyes are not enjoying the discrepancy." He turns and vomits on the wall.
6
ERIDIAN SECTION
WIDE — Force drops. Ryland can breathe. But everything is upside-down — centrifuge extended, ship in two halves.
WIDE
RYLAND
HALF-G — UPSIDE DOWN
"Much more manageable now. Less than 1g, actually." The lab is now "up." The dormitory is "up" from that.
7
MEDIUM — Ryland puts on EVA gloves. Back in control room: stands on the consoles (they're the floor now).
MEDIUM
RYLAND
UPSIDE-DOWN PHYSICS
"I stand on the consoles. The control panels are 'down' now." He positions himself over Rocky's body.
8
MEDIUM — Ryland tries to lift Rocky. Gets him briefly off the floor. Immediately puts him back.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
200 POUNDS
"Good. God." He puts Rocky back down. Cannot move him like this.
9
MEDIUM — Ryland lashes safety tethers under Rocky's carapace, loops them over his shoulders. A makeshift backpack.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
THE TETHER SOLUTION
"Burns my arms in several places during the process. I'll deal with that later."
10
MEDIUM — Ryland climbing the ladder into the lab, hauling Rocky on his back. One rung at a time. Agony.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
ONE RUNG AT A TIME
"My shoulders scream in pain. Two hundred pounds of alien held up by two thin straps digging into my collarbones."
11
MEDIUM — Lab interior, upside-down. Everything in piles on the ceiling. Ryland and Rocky arrive.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
THE LAB — DISASTER
"The lab is a disaster. Everything is in piles all over the ceiling. Only the bolted-down things remain."
II
ROCKY TO AIRLOCK & RYLAND WAKES
12
MEDIUM — Dormitory hatchway. Ryland repeats the brutal rung-by-rung process. Gravity lighter near centre.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
DORMITORY HATCH
"The force is less up here. I'm closer to the centre of the centrifuge. The higher I get, the easier things will be."
13
MEDIUM — Dormitory. Rocky's section in chaos — workbench on the ceiling. Ryland's bunk has pivoted.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
DORMITORY — CHAOS
"My little section barely fits us both. Rocky's workbench wasn't bolted in place. It's on the ceiling now."
14
MEDIUM — Ryland atop his pivoted bunk. Reaches the airlock between sections. Door already open — Rocky used it.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
THE AIRLOCK — OPEN
"The airlock door sits open on my side. He used it to come save me." The weight of that settles.
15
MEDIUM — Ryland inside airlock, pulling Rocky in with the straps. Sees the destroyed control panel.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
PANEL — DESTROYED
"I see the destroyed box that was once the airlock-control panel." Smashed by debris.
16
CLOSE — The emergency lever. Ryland's hand on it. The spinning-wheel lock door beside him.
CLOSE-UP
RYLAND
THE LEVER
"I coil my muscles and mentally count to three."
17
MEDIUM — Ryland pulls lever. Ammonia floods in. He leaps and slams the door shut.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
THE LEAP
"I pull the lever and leap toward my compartment." Blazing-hot ammonia floods the airlock.
18
CLOSE — Ryland's face. Eyes on fire. Lungs failing. Ammonia exposure. Agony.
CLOSE-UP
RYLAND
CHEMICAL BURNS
"My eyes burn like they're on fire. My lungs feel like a hundred knives are having a dance-off."
19
MEDIUM — Ship's medical arm intubates Ryland. IV in his arm. "Sedation," says the computer.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
MEDICAL INTERVENTION
COMPUTER: TRIAGE
"Multiple injuries. Intubate." The mechanical arms grab him. Something shoved down his throat. Then darkness.
20
MEDIUM — Ryland wakes. Oxygen mask. IV in right arm. Left arm bandaged wrist to shoulder.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
SIX HOURS LATER
"I wake up covered in medical equipment and pain." Blood oxygen: 91%.
21
MEDIUM — Ryland looks through to Rocky's section. Rocky in the airlock where Ryland left him.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
WATCHING / WAITING
"Rocky is right where I left him in the airlock." How do you tell if an Eridian is dead?
22
1°/sec — SLOW ROTATE
MEDIUM — Ryland flips the Centrifuge rotation controls. Crew compartment begins to rotate — 1°/sec.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
RIGHTING THE SHIP
"I order the crew compartment to rotate. Very, very slowly. Three minutes to turn around."
III
THE TERRARIUM & THE STEEL BOX
23
WIDE — Ryland retrieves the sampler probe from the ship airlock. Careful. This is what everything was for.
WIDE
RYLAND
THE SAMPLER
"Kind of glad I left it there. The EVA suit cushioned it from the sudden accelerations."
24
-51°C
0.02 atm
⬡
⬡
INSERT — Sampler readouts: −51°C, 0.02 atm. Eridian numerology on the dials. Ryland translates.
INSERT
RYLAND
SAMPLER READINGS
"Analog dial indicators in Eridian base-six numerology. I've seen enough to translate."
25
MEDIUM — Ryland in lab. Finds a cracked vacuum drum. Patches it with epoxy. Tests: holds vacuum.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
LAB SALVAGE
"A drum-shaped glass cylinder, about a foot in diameter. I patch the crack with epoxy."
26
CO₂ CH₄ Ar
INSERT — Sampler probe inside vacuum drum. Astrophage smear on cylinder wall. Cotton swab dropped in.
INSERT
ADRIANTERRARIUM
ASTROPHAGE INSIDE
"I smear Astrophage along the inner wall and drop the cotton swab next to the sample probe."
27
CLOSE — Cotton swab in terrarium — it's changed. Fluffier. Something is happening on it.
CLOSE-UP
LIFE — POSSIBLY
COTTON SWAB CHANGED
"The cotton swab has changed. Just a little bit. It's… fluffier." Ryland hunkers down and stares.
28
WIDE — Ryland sets up a webcam time-lapse on the terrarium. Documents everything. Science rule #1.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
DOCUMENT IT
"If something is changing unexpectedly, document it." One frame per second time-lapse.
29
FUEL BAY STATUS
OK
OK
7 LOST 2 REMAIN
MEDIUM — Nav console. Ship in stable-ish orbit. Seven of nine fuel bays either jettisoned or breached.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
SHIP STATUS
2/9 BAYS INTACT
"Two fuel bays remaining. The Astrophage in those bays must not see Adrian again."
30
MEDIUM — Ryland finds the hull micro-breach. Frost forming around a hairline crack. Air escaping to vacuum.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
HULL BREACH
STORAGE CRAWLSPACE
"I only spot it because there's a small frosty buildup around the edges. Air escaping into vacuum gets cold fast."
31
15:00
HOLD PATCH
MEDIUM — Ryland patches the breach. Epoxy and a metal plate. Holds it for fifteen minutes — it's cold.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
PATCH APPLIED
"Epoxy takes a long time to set when it's cold. I just hold the patch for longer. Fifteen minutes."
32
WIDE — The steel box. Ryland holds it up. High-pressure air pump, camera, motors, drill — all inside.
WIDE
RYLAND
THE INVENTION
"I wish I could claim I'm a genius who made this all from scratch. The reality is I only made the box."
33
CLOSE — Xenonite chip glued to drill bit. Epoxy set. Ryland pulls at it: cannot separate them.
CLOSE-UP
RYLAND
XENONITE + EPOXY
"I use all my strength to try to pull them apart. I can't." He nods. This might work.
IV
THE DRILL & THE SMOKE
34
MEDIUM — Ryland epoxies the steel box to the xenonite airlock wall. Holds it steady for ten minutes.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
BOX INSTALLED
"Human hands are better clamps than any tool I might have in the lab." He stands there, pressing.
35
CLOSE — Ryland in breathing mask and goggles. Spike and hammer in hands. Ready for the drill.
CLOSE-UP
RYLAND
BRACED FOR DANGER
"Yes, it's ridiculously dangerous. But I just don't know if Rocky will survive without help."
36
CLOSE — Inside box: drill bit grinding through xenonite. Chips breaking off. Agonisingly slow.
CLOSE-UP
DRILLING XENONITE
"It takes so long for that drill to get through the xenonite, I actually calm down out of boredom."
37
MEDIUM — Breakthrough. Eridian air rushes in with a WHUMP. Box holds. Ryland braced, eyes shut.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
PRESSURE BREACH
"The bit is immediately launched back into the box by the pressure. A whump. Eridian air rushes in."
38
NO FEED
MEDIUM — Camera feed dead. Box glowing red-hot. Ryland can't touch it. Improvising blind.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
CAMERA DEAD
210°C INSIDE
"Webcams aren't designed to work at 210°C and 29 atmospheres. The solid steel box is an excellent heat conductor."
39
WIDE — Ryland operating the pump blind. Sweeping the jet of Eridian air across Rocky's carapace.
WIDE
RYLAND / ROCKY
PRESSURE JET — AIMED
"Air at 29 atmospheres acts almost like water. I sweep left and right, inching down and up in a pattern."
40
CLOSE — Rocky's carapace vents. Jet finds the sweet spot. BLACK SMOKE belches out.
CLOSE-UP
ROCKY
THE SWEET SPOT
"All of a sudden, Rocky's carapace vents belch out black smoke. Like blasting an air duster into an old computer."
41
WIDE — Ryland systematically sweeps the jet. Vent by vent. Soot clearing. The organ breathing again.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
CLEARING THE VENTS
"I sweep back and forth, trying to hit each vent one by one. The latter vents don't cause nearly the commotion."
42
MEDIUM — Ryland: "Well, buddy. I've done all I can. I just hope you can do the rest."
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
ALL I CAN DO
"I shut off the pump." He looks at Rocky through the xenonite wall. Waits.
43
SEAL 1
SEAL 2
SEAL 3
MEDIUM — Ryland adds secondary and tertiary containment boxes over the device. Three seals now.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
SECONDARY CONTAINMENT
"I spend the rest of the day building containment. Eridian air will have to breach three seals to get in."
44
MEDIUM — Ryland at xenonite wall. Rocky — still. A long vigil begins. "I hope Rocky wakes up."
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
THE WAIT
"Well, buddy. I've done everything I can. Now it's up to you."
V
ROCKY WAKES & “FRIEND DO THAT”
45
MEDIUM — Ryland watching through xenonite. Over a day passes. Rocky: still. Then — one arm moves.
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
MOVEMENT
"One of his arms moves. I'm not imagining it this time. I'm not imagining it."
46
CLOSE — Rocky speaks. One word through the xenonite. Barely audible vibration. "Question?"
CLOSE-UP
ROCKY
FIRST WORD
"Then a sound through the xenonite wall. One word. Faint as a whisper. 'Question?'"
47
WIDE — Ryland overwhelmed. "You're alive!" Rocky, faint but real: "Yes. Alive."
WIDE
RYLAND / ROCKY
RELIEF
"You're alive! I don't think I've ever been happier to hear a single word in my entire life."
48
MEDIUM — Rocky upright but weakened. Moving slowly. All limbs responding, but tentative.
MEDIUM
ROCKY
UPRIGHT — WEAK
"He's upright. That's progress. He's moving. Slowly. But he's moving."
49
TWO-SHOT — Rocky: "Need warm. Very cold now." He spent all his heat reserves saving Ryland.
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
TOO COLD
"Need warm. Very cold now." He spent all his heat on me. Now he's too cold.
50
IDEAL 96°C
SAFE MIN
CURRENT ▲
DANGER <40°C
INSERT — Rocky's thermal crisis: metabolic heat depleted. Safe temp range, current temp, danger threshold.
INSERT
THERMAL DIAGRAM
ROCKY: HYPO-THERMIC
"His body generates heat, but he burned through his reserves. He needs warmth from outside."
51
MEDIUM — Ryland building the heating element device. Wire through xenonite tube joint.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
THE HEATER
"I can run a wire through one of the xenonite tube joints. Heating element on his side. Power on mine."
52
TWO-SHOT — Rocky's arm reaches through tube joint to guide the wire from his side.
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
COOPERATION
"I help." Rocky's arm snakes through the tube joint and guides the wire from the other side.
53
MEDIUM — Heating element glowing orange in Rocky's section. Rocky: "Warm is good. More warm please."
MEDIUM
ROCKY / RYLAND
HEAT FLOWING
"Warm is good. More warm please." Best three words I've ever heard.
54
TWO-SHOT — Ryland: "You saved my life. You came into my air. You almost died for me."
TWO-SHOT
RYLAND / ROCKY
RECKONING
"You came into my partition. You breathed my air. You almost died because of me."
55
TWO-SHOT — Rocky: "You are friend. Friend do that. Is simple." Ryland: speechless.
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
FRIENDSHIP
"You are friend. Friend do that. Is simple." The most Rocky sentence ever spoken.
VI
THE SAMPLE & CHAPTER’S END
56
OK
OK
INSERT — Orbit status and fuel bay count. Stable-ish. Seven of nine bays gone. Two remain.
INSERT
RYLAND
FUEL CRISIS
7/9 BAYS LOST
"Seven of nine tanks are gone. I have two left. That's not enough to get home."
57
MEDIUM — Ryland alone with the weight of it. Two tanks. Cannot go home. Cannot complete anything.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
THE WEIGHT
"Two tanks. Not enough to go home. Not enough to finish anything. I have to rethink everything."
58
TWO-SHOT — Rocky: "Something wrong inside. Human air very bad. Like acid."
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
INTERNAL DAMAGE
"Human air very bad. Like acid." His carapace didn't fully protect him. Internal damage unknown.
59
MEDIUM — Ryland: "Will you recover fully?" Rocky: "Unknown. Maybe weeks. Maybe never full."
MEDIUM
RYLAND / ROCKY
PROGNOSIS
"Unknown. Maybe weeks. Maybe never full." The most frightening thing Rocky has ever said.
60
DEATH
<40°C
SAFE ZONE
HOT
96°C
HEATER: 96°C TARGET
CURRENT: 82°C ↑ RISING
INSERT — Heater calibration chart. Rocky's safe zone 40–120°C. Ideal 96°C. Heater set.
INSERT
CALIBRATION
SAFE ZONE: 40–120°C
"Safe zone is 40 to 120. Ideal is 96. The heater can manage that. This will work."
61
TWO-SHOT — Rocky: "Temp now 82°C. Rising. Is good. Much better." Both: quiet relief.
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
WARMING UP
"Temp now 82. Rising. Is good. Much better." The heater is working. Rocky is warming.
62
MEDIUM — Ryland: the sampler. Still in the airlock where he left it. He forgot it entirely.
MEDIUM
RYLAND
THE SAMPLER — FORGOTTEN
"The sampler. It's still in the airlock. I forgot about it entirely in all the chaos."
63
TWO-SHOT — Rocky excited: "The sampler! Did we get Astrophage from Adrian?" Ryland: "Let me check."
TWO-SHOT
ROCKY / RYLAND
THE MISSION
"The sampler! Did we get Astrophage from Adrian? That's what all of this was for."
64
ASTROPHAGE
DETECTED
INSERT — Sampler instrument panel. Spectrometer reading: ASTROPHAGE DETECTED. Adrian organisms inside.
INSERT
CONFIRMED
MISSION: SUCCESS
"ASTROPHAGE DETECTED. The sample worked. We got what we came for."
65
WIDE — Rocky: "WE HAVE ASTROPHAGE!" Both celebrate. The relief, the joy, the cost — all at once.
WIDE — FINAL
ROCKY / RYLAND
WE DID IT
"We have Astrophage! We did it!" The joy is real. So is the damage. So is the uncertainty of what comes next.
66
WIDE — Rocky on his side, healing. Ryland on his. Xenonite between them. Chapter ends.
WIDE — FINAL
ROCKY / RYLAND
CHAPTER END
TWO SURVIVORS
Two survivors. One sample. The data Rocky almost died for is in hand. What does the Astrophage tell them?
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