Chapter 14

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WIDE — The conference table. Ryland slouched and bored, Dimitri, Lokken, Stratt at the head. An empty seat beside Stratt for the newcomer.

WIDERYLAND / STRATTSTAFF MEETING

"Another day, another staff meeting. Who would have thought saving the world could be so boring?"

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CLOSE — Ryland. Half-lidded eyes, chin practically in his palm. The face of a man bored by the end of the world.

CLOSERYLANDBORED

"Another day, another staff meeting. Who would have thought saving the world could be so boring?"

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MEDIUM — Stratt introduces Leclerc. He waves halfheartedly. Distinguished bearing, tired eyes. He already knows what he's been handed.

MEDIUMSTRATT / LECLERCINTRODUCTION

"Everyone, I want you to meet Dr. François Leclerc. I've put him in charge of tracking, understanding, and — if possible — ameliorating the climate effects of Astrophage."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc, palms out, shrugging. An honest admission: his field is inexact. A lot of guesswork. He's not going to pretend otherwise.

MEDIUMLECLERCUNCERTAINTY

"It's hard to find two climatologists who agree on the color of an orange. Climate science is in its infancy."

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CLOSE — Stratt. Arms crossed. Eyes flat and steady. Completely unmoved by caveats. She wants numbers. Tangible things. Not vague predictions.

CLOSESTRATTAUTHORITY

"I want numbers. Tangible things, not vague predictions."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc delivers the number. The room goes silent. Half the people currently alive — 3.5 billion — dead. Nineteen years from now.

MEDIUMLECLERC19 YEARS

"Nineteen years. That's my estimate for when half the people currently alive will be dead."

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WIDE — Every face at the table. Dimitri's jaw agape. Ryland and Lokken look at each other. Even Stratt is taken aback. The room is completely silent.

WIDEALLSILENCE

"The silence that followed was unlike anything I'd ever experienced."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc, flat and dry. Not cruel — certain. "Is that tangible enough for you?" The most devastating rhetorical question in the room.

MEDIUMLECLERC / STRATTCERTAINTY

"Yes. Is that tangible enough for you?"

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MEDIUM — Leclerc and Stratt face off. He is irritated; she challenged his data. "All I have to do is tell you something you don't want to hear."

MEDIUMLECLERC / STRATTFACE-OFF

"Don't patronize me, Dr. Leclerc. Just answer my questions."

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DIAGRAM — The math of famine. Six global staple crops, each marked for failure. Temperature sensitivity bars crossing into the danger zone.

DIAGRAMFAMINE MATHEXTINCTION

"Wheat, barley, millet, potatoes, soy, rice. All of them are pretty sensitive about temperature ranges."

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MEDIUM — Stratt: 19 years isn't enough. The Hail Mary takes 13 years each way — 26 minimum. She's not accepting 19. She needs 27.

MEDIUMSTRATT / LECLERCNOT ENOUGH TIME

"Nineteen years isn't enough time. We need at least twenty-six years. Twenty-seven would be better."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc recoiling in horror. He is an environmental activist. A tree-hugger. And Stratt just told him to deliberately heat the planet.

MEDIUMLECLERCMORAL HORROR

"What? Are you kidding?"

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DIAGRAM — Stratt's logic: Astrophage dims the sun → Earth cools → deliberate greenhouse gas blanket insulates → buys the 27 years the Hail Mary needs.

DIAGRAMTHE PLANGREENHOUSE

"A nice blanket of greenhouse gases would buy us some time, right? It would insulate Earth like a parka."

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MEDIUM — Two beats. Stratt: "I don't care about morality." Ryland, deadpan: "She really doesn't." The most accurate corroboration in history.

MEDIUMSTRATT / RYLANDMORALITY

"I don't care about morality," Stratt said. "She really doesn't," I said.

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WIDE — Stratt shooing Leclerc out: "Get to work!" He gulps. He has been handed the most morally repugnant assignment of his career. He will do it anyway.

MEDIUMSTRATT / LECLERCGET TO WORK

"I care about saving humanity. Come up with something to make us last at least twenty-seven years." She made a shooing motion. "Get to work!"

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DIAGRAM — The methane plan. Antarctica is a frozen jungle — ancient methane trapped in ice. Nuclear strikes cleave the shelf. Methane rises, warming Earth.

DIAGRAMANTARCTICATHE METHANE PLAN

"Antarctica used to be a jungle. The decomposition gases — methane — got trapped in the ice. We release them."

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DIAGRAM — Why factories can't work. A century of global industry barely moved the needle. The methane shock from Antarctica does it instantly. Scale is everything.

DIAGRAMSCALEWHY NUKES

"We'd need thousands of times the production that we could possibly do. It took us a century of burning coal and oil to even notice."

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WIDE — Aircraft carrier flight deck at night. The science team stares toward the barely-visible Antarctic coastline lit by moonlight. Destroyers on the horizon.

WIDELECLERC / STRATTBEFORE DETONATION

"We anchored off the coast of western Antarctica in the dead of night. The largest naval exclusion zone in history."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc's quiet confession on deck. He's a tree-hugging antiwar hippie from Lyon. And now he's authorising 241 nuclear weapons. He needs Ryland to listen.

MEDIUMLECLERC / RYLANDCONFESSION

"I spent my entire life as an unapologetic hippie. And now...this. It's necessary, but horrible."

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MEDIUM — Ryland explains fusion physics to Leclerc. Small fission trigger, large fusion reaction. Minimal radiation. The tiniest silver lining to the worst day of Leclerc's life.

MEDIUMRYLAND / LECLERCFUSION PHYSICS

"They're fusion bombs. The big explosion is just hydrogen and helium. No radiation from that." "Well, that's something."

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WIDE — The moment after detonation. Nothing happens. The Antarctic coastline: completely unchanged. No flash. No explosion. Just silence and waiting.

WIDEALLDETONATION

"Nothing happened. The coastline remained as it was. No explosion. No flash. Not even a pop."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc reads from his tablet. The nukes have detonated. The shockwave is ten minutes away. He looks down at the carrier deck.

MEDIUMLECLERCAFTERMATH

"The nukes have detonated. The shockwave should be here in ten minutes or so. It'll just sound like distant thunder."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc buries his face in his hands and cries. Stratt puts her hand on his shoulder. Uncharacteristically gentle. "You did what you had to do."

MEDIUMLECLERC / STRATTBREAKING DOWN

"You did what you had to do. We're all doing what we have to do." He buried his face in his hands and cried.

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MEDIUM — Ryland asks: what will you do after? Stratt: "Trial. Jail, probably." She shrugs. She has known for years. She does not care even slightly.

MEDIUMSTRATT / RYLANDSACRIFICE

"Once the Hail Mary launches, my authority ends. I'll probably be put on trial. Might spend the rest of my life in jail."

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WIDE — The tunnel. Three hours, fifty new words. Ryland explains ionising radiation to Rocky, who has never needed to know this. Rocky's crew is dead because of it.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYRADIATION TALK

"Thank," he says in unusually low tones. "Now I know how my friends died."

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DIAGRAM — Erid's vital stats: 8.5× Earth mass, 2× diameter, 5.1hr day, 0.2× star distance. Magnetic field 25× Earth's. Atmosphere 29× thicker. Zero radiation reaches surface.

DIAGRAMERID FACTSSUPER-EARTH

"Erid's magnetic field is at least twenty-five times as strong as Earth's. Plus, their atmosphere is twenty-nine times as thick."

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WIDE — Erid's surface: pitch dark. Not dim — completely, utterly lightless. The magnetic field and thick atmosphere block everything. Eridians never evolved eyes.

WIDEPITCH DARKNO EYES

"For Erid, it's 100 percent. Radiation just doesn't get to the ground. Light doesn't even get to the ground — that's why they never evolved eyes."

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DIAGRAM — Eridian space elevator: a cable to synchronous orbit, used for millennia. No moon (tidal forces ripped it away). Rocky's crew were the first Eridians to leave orbit at all.

DIAGRAMSPACE ELEVATORNO MOON

"Eridians invented the space elevator. Rocky and his crew were the first Eridians to leave orbit at all."

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TWO-SHOT — The answer. Astrophage absorbs radiation. Rocky worked near the fuel stores — surrounded by Astrophage. His crewmates were elsewhere. The radiation got to them.

TWO-SHOTRYLAND / ROCKYTHE ANSWER

"Astrophage stops radiation. You were surrounded by Astrophage most of the time. Your crewmates weren't."

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CLOSE — Rocky in low, sad tones: "Understand. Thank. I now know why I not die." The grief of surviving when his crewmates didn't.

CLOSEROCKYSURVIVOR GUILT

"Understand. Thank. I now know why I not die."

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TWO-SHOT — Ryland advises Rocky: stay in the workshop near Astrophage. Place Astrophage on the tunnel wall. Rocky: "You do same." Ryland: "I don't need to."

TWO-SHOTRYLAND / ROCKYRADIATION SAFETY

"Radiation is here too. Stay in your workshop as much as you can. Bring Astrophage to this tunnel."

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WIDE — Ryland floats in the tunnel, a question forming. Rocky continues working on his repairs with multiple limbs simultaneously. An Eridian can multitask like nothing Ryland has seen.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYCURIOSITY

"A random thought occurs to me. Why is Eridian science and human science so similar? Billions of years apart."

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DIAGRAM — Rocky's insight: the Goldilocks technology band. Too primitive = extinction. Too advanced = solve Astrophage at home. The narrow band sends a ship. Both species live there.

DIAGRAMTECH BANDROCKY'S INSIGHT

"If planet has less science, it can't make a spaceship. If planet has more science it can destroy Astrophage without leaving."

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CLOSE — Ryland. The expression of a scientist who just had something utterly obvious pointed out to him. Rocky worked it out long ago. He just waited.

CLOSERYLANDOBVIOUS IN RETROSPECT

"Huh. I hadn't thought of that. But it's obvious now that Rocky says it."

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WIDE — Earth and Erid in the void. 16 light-years apart. The galaxy is 100,000 light-years wide. This proximity is almost impossible unless something connected them.

WIDESCALETOO CLOSE

"Earth and Erid are only sixteen light-years apart. The galaxy is one hundred thousand light-years wide. Life must be rare. But we are so close together."

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TWO-SHOT — Simply: "Possible we are family." Ryland stops working entirely. The idea has never occurred to him. And then, all at once, it has.

TWO-SHOTROCKY / RYLANDFAMILY

"Possible we are family." We're related? How could — "Oh! You mean...whoa!"

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CLOSE — Ryland's full eureka. Arms out, jaw dropped. Panspermia. A shared interstellar ancestor seeded both planets. He and Rocky might literally be distant relatives.

CLOSERYLANDEUREKA

"Oh! You mean... whoa! It's a darn good theory! Rocky might be a long-lost relative. Very long. But still."

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DIAGRAM — The panspermia model: a pre-Astrophage ancestor, interstellar and tough, seeded both Earth and Erid from Tau Ceti's direction. Rocky and Ryland share a very distant ancestor.

DIAGRAMPANSPERMIACOMMON ANCESTOR

"Earth life and Astrophage are too similar for coincidence. The same thing happened to Erid. Rocky might be a distant relative."

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TWO-SHOT — "Very good theory!" Rocky: "Thank." He'd worked it out a while ago and just waited for Ryland to catch up. A quiet moment of interspecies warmth.

TWO-SHOTRYLAND / ROCKYFAMILY WARMTH

"Very good theory!" I say again. "Thank," Rocky says. He'd already worked that all out a while ago.

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WIDE — The tunnel divider. Two beings separated by xenonite, ammonia, and 200 degrees. But somewhere in deep time, sharing a common ancestor. The wall has never seemed less important.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYCONNECTED

"Rocky might be a long-lost relative. Very long. The trees outside my house are closer relatives to me than Rocky. But still."

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WIDE — The carrier at night. The full fleet arranged in the largest naval exclusion zone in history. Stratt is on the walkie-talkie. The science team stares at the dark horizon.

WIDESTRATT / ALLFLEET / EXCLUSION ZONE

"Destroyer One, confirm observation status." "Ready." The largest naval exclusion zone in history.

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MEDIUM — Stratt calm and professional, walkie-talkie raised, calling in confirmation from each ship. "Condition Yellow." Complete authority. Complete control.

MEDIUMSTRATTCONDITION YELLOW

"All ships: We are at Condition Yellow. Submarine Two, confirm observation status." "Ready."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc on deck, tablet in hand, counting down. He looks like a man being led to the gallows. He confesses everything to Ryland because Ryland just listens.

MEDIUMLECLERC / RYLANDTHE COUNTDOWN

"I wish to God this wasn't on my shoulders. I spent my entire life as an unapologetic hippie."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc, tablet raised, eyes perhaps closed, voice flat: "Three…two…one…detonation." He says the word the way a man reads a death warrant.

MEDIUMLECLERCDETONATION

"Three…two…one…detonation." The word lands like a stone.

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WIDE — Nothing. The Antarctic coastline: unchanged. No flash. No explosion. Not even a pop. The team stares into the silence. The nukes detonated 50 metres underground.

WIDEALLSILENCE

"Nothing happened. The coastline remained as it was. No explosion. No flash. Not even a pop."

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MEDIUM — Leclerc buries his face in his hands and cries. Stratt places her hand on his shoulder. Uncharacteristically gentle. "You did what you had to do."

MEDIUMLECLERC / STRATTBREAKING DOWN

"You did what you had to do. We're all doing what we have to do." He buried his face in his hands and cried.

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WIDE — Ten minutes later: a distant rumble like thunder. The shockwave. Antarctica is already changed. The team stands motionless on the deck. The world is already different.

WIDEALLAFTERMATH / THUNDER

"It'll just sound like distant thunder." The world has changed. They stand there and hear it happen.

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WIDE — The biology talk begins. Hours pass. Both scientists are intensely fascinated by how the other's body works. Rocky works on his device while talking — Eridians multitask effortlessly.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYBIOLOGY DEEP DIVE

"Rocky and I talk about biology for hours. We'd be pretty lame scientists if we weren't."

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DIAGRAM — Eridian body cross-section: mineral carapace, honeycombed metallic bones, liquid mercury blood, silicate nerves. Only a few kg of biological material total.

DIAGRAMERIDIAN BODYPHYSIOLOGY

"Rocky's carapace is oxidized minerals. His bones are honeycombed metallic alloys. His blood is mostly liquid mercury. His nerves are inorganic silicates."

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MEDIUM — Ryland works out the analogy: if bees evolved to build hives that could walk, with a queen as intelligent as a human — that's an Eridian. Except the bees are single-celled.

MEDIUMRYLANDBEE-HIVE ANALOGY

"If bees evolved to make hives that could walk, and the queen was as intelligent as a human — that would be similar to an Eridian."

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WIDE DIAGRAM — The full steam-power system: ambient blood at 210°C, hot blood at 305°C, radiator slits venting heat. Sleep = hot-blood cooling = total paralysis. Rocky's body is a biosphere.

WIDESTEAM POWERERIDIAN PHYSIOLOGY

"Eridians are steam-powered. Two circulatory systems: ambient at 210°C, hot at 305°C. And that's why Eridians sleep — they're legitimately paralyzed."

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TWO-SHOT — Rocky stops working entirely. "You hear light, question?" Ryland points to his eyes. "These focus and detect light. Light gives me enough information to understand the whole room."

TWO-SHOTRYLAND / ROCKYYOU HEAR LIGHT

"You hear light, question?" He stops working on his device entirely. He is genuinely amazed.

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CLOSE — Rocky close-up. His entire body surface — carapace and all limbs — is a distributed microphone. Tiny receptors everywhere. His brain computes 3D sound from arrival-time differences.

CLOSEROCKYDISTRIBUTED MICROPHONE

"Everywhere. Tiny receptors on outer shell. All report back to brain. Like touch." His whole body is a microphone.

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DIAGRAM — Two solutions to the same problem: human (two eyes → full 3D model from light) vs Eridian (whole-body receptors → full 3D model from sound). Nature found both.

DIAGRAMSENSORY COMPARISONTWO SOLUTIONS

"Light gives information to humans like sound gives information to Eridians." Same result. Completely different mechanism.

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WIDE — The clear xenonite divider. Rocky designed it for sound transmission; Ryland chose it for light. Neither was thinking of the other's needs. Pure good luck — and it worked for both.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYGOOD LUCK

"I gave choices for different qualities of sound. Never thought of light." "Just good luck," I say. "Good luck," he agrees.

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CLOSE — Rocky's sleep posture — complete paralysis. All limbs hang. The hot-blood system must cool for servicing; muscles go offline entirely. A sleeping Eridian cannot wake up.

CLOSEROCKYSLEEP PARALYSIS

"They don't sleep like a human does. They're legitimately paralyzed. A sleeping Eridian can't wake up."

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TWO-SHOT — Rocky completes the device. His carapace is held slightly higher than usual. Rocky is proud. "I am done." "What is it?" "Device keeps me alive in small room."

TWO-SHOTROCKY / RYLANDDEVICE COMPLETE

"He holds his carapace just a little higher than usual. Rocky is proud."

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MEDIUM — Rocky returns with transparent xenonite pentagons — each about 1cm thick, a foot across. He begins assembling them edge to edge with liquid xenonite glue.

MEDIUMROCKY / RYLANDPENTAGON PLATES

"He returns with several plates of transparent xenonite. Each plate is a pentagon about a centimetre thick and a foot across."

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WIDE — Rocky assembles pentagons edge to edge, gluing with liquid xenonite. Two halves of a dodecahedron taking shape. He works with several limbs simultaneously.

WIDEROCKY / RYLANDGLOBE ASSEMBLY

"He assembles the pentagons edge to edge, using some kind of thick liquid glue from a tube to hold them together."

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MEDIUM — Rocky holds up the completed geodesic sphere toward Ryland proudly. Diameter about a metre — easily big enough to contain Rocky. One word: "Room."

MEDIUMROCKYROOM

"He holds them toward me proudly and places them together. 'Room.' The 'room' is a geodesic sphere made of pentagons."

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WIDE — Ryland's delight: Rocky wants to come aboard. Rocky's reason: human science is better. He wants to see a computer that thinks. He wants to see everything.

WIDERYLAND / ROCKYCOME ABOARD

"Want to see human technology. Machine that think. Eridians no have that." "Yes! Allowed! Come look at anything you want!"

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CLOSE — Rocky straps the device onto his carapace, covering the radiator slits. Ryland alarmed: isn't that dangerous? Rocky: "No. This make hot air into cold air."

CLOSEROCKYLIFE SUPPORT STRAPPED ON

"Is that blocking your radiator?" "No. This make hot air into cold air." Astrophage air conditioning.

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TWO-SHOT — Rocky seals himself inside the globe. He just floats there. One minute. Two. Ryland holds his breath. The life support either works or it doesn't.

TWO-SHOTROCKY / RYLANDTHE TEST

"I test." He just floats there for a minute.

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CLOSE — Rocky inside the completed globe: "Works! Happy!" His most expressive statement yet. Two words. The suit works. He is going to visit the Hail Mary.

CLOSEROCKYIT WORKS

"Works! Happy!" Two words. The most expressive thing Rocky has ever said.

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TWO-SHOT — Rocky dismisses Ryland from the tunnel. "You leave. I make new divider wall. Bigger airlock." Ryland collects his mattress, toolkit, laptop, and seals both doors.

TWO-SHOTROCKY / RYLANDYOU LEAVE

"You leave tunnel. I make new divider wall. Bigger airlock." I collect all my belongings.

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WIDE — Ryland in the control room, tidying up. A small smile. He wasn't expecting company. An alien made of mercury and steam in a xenonite sphere is about to board his ship.

WIDERYLANDTIDYING UP

"I wasn't expecting company." A xenonite sphere containing an alien made of mercury and steam is about to enter his ship.

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CLOSE — Ryland's face: quiet wonder. The alien is about to board. He's spent his whole scientific career looking away from Earth. Now first contact is physically crossing into his ship.

CLOSERYLANDWONDER / CROSSING THE THRESHOLD

"I spend the next hour tidying up. I wasn't expecting company." The End of Chapter 14.

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