CHAPTER 15

Project Hail Mary — Fan Storyboard

47 PANELS 3 ACTS AUTHOR: ANDY WEIR
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I
TUNNEL REBUILD, FIRST CROSSING
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MEDIUM — Ryland at airlock porthole, ear almost pressed to it. Clanks from the other side. This time he's going to find out what's happening.
MEDIUMRYLANDCURIOUS
Clinks and clanks. Something is being installed.
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POV through porthole — hull robot on Blip-A's exterior removing the old tunnel. Old tunnel drifts off into space, its job done.
POVBLIP-AANTICLIMACTIC
"Oh. Well. That's anticlimactic." — Ryland.
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POV — robot placing new tunnel against Blip-A's hull and running xenonite glue along the seam. Precise, mechanical, autonomous.
POVBLIP-ACONSTRUCTION
Xenonite glue administered along the edge. No human hand required.
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MEDIUM — New tunnel installed. Ryland peers in: the entire divider wall is now one large cabinet-sized airlock — big enough for Rocky with room to spare. A metal stripe runs the full length of the floor.
MEDIUMRYLANDNEW TUNNEL
Not large enough to hold Ryland. He won't be visiting the Blip-A anytime soon. "Hmph."
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INSERT — Two new features run the full length of the tunnel: the metal stripe along the floor (iron — magnetic) and a square xenonite pipe along the ceiling (atmosphere delivery).
INSERTDETAIL
Rocky designed both. One is his roadway. The other is life support for both sides.
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ABSTRACT — The tunnel fills with atmosphere from both sides simultaneously. Left: human-breathable air (cool blue-grey). Right: Eridian ammonia mix (amber-warm). A quiet whoosh.
ABSTRACTATMOSPHERE
"With a whoosh, Rocky's side fills with fog. Then a second whoosh fills my side." The pipe delivers both at once.
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MEDIUM — Blip-A door opens. Rocky emerges inside his xenonite geodesic sphere — the spaceball. One limb is raised in a wave. He's wearing something like overalls and a bandolier.
MEDIUMROCKYFIRST CROSSING
The spaceball: a geodesic sphere of transparent xenonite pentagons, about a metre across. Rocky is inside, AC unit on his back.
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CLOSE — Spaceball bottom face pressed against the metal stripe. The pentagon face touching the stripe is held by magnets Rocky is gripping from inside. He rolls himself along the iron rail.
CLOSEROCKYMAGNETIC LOCOMOTION
"Those blocks Rocky is holding are magnets. He rolls the ball along the metal line. It's mesmerizing to watch."
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MEDIUM — Rocky navigates the large cabinet-airlock using his magnets on the metal stripe. The airlock cycles: hissing of pumps, pressure equalisation. Ryland waits on the other side.
MEDIUMROCKYAIRLOCK CYCLING
He manipulates the metal controls through the xenonite shell with his magnets. Ingenious.
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MEDIUM — Ryland opens the Hail Mary airlock door. The spaceball floats through into the ship. Rocky is inside his alien sphere, inside Ryland's spaceship. They are roommates.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYFIRST CONTACT — ABOARD
"Hello!" "Hello!" The door opens and the alien enters the human spacecraft.
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MEDIUM — Ryland clutches the spaceball. It barely moves. His arms are out, face straining. The thing has the inertia of a motorcycle. Mercury blood. Metal bones. Of course it's heavy.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYHEAVY
"Rocky is heavy. Much heavier than I thought. It's like pushing a motorcycle in neutral."
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80 kg 168 kg
WIDE — Scale comparison. Left: Ryland at 80 kg. Right: Rocky's spaceball at 168 kg. Rocky outweighs Ryland more than two to one. Mercury blood, metallic bones, mineral carapace.
WIDERYLANDROCKYMASS COMPARISON
"Humans have very small mass!" Rocky says. "I'm mostly water," Ryland replies.
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MEDIUM — Ryland hauling the spaceball down the Hail Mary's internal tunnel toward the control room. It skids and skitters. Zero gravity means mass but no weight — still like pushing a motorcycle.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYSHIP TOUR BEGINS
Rocky shifts around inside his ball constantly — tilting his carapace to "look" at things with his sonar.
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CLOSE — Rocky inside the spaceball, body tilted at an angle. He's constantly shifting position to get a better sonar 'view' of new surroundings — like a dog tilting its head at a sound.
CLOSEROCKYSONAR TILT
"He tends to shift around when he's looking at something new. Like a dog tilting its head to get more information about a sound."
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MEDIUM — Control room. Ryland at the consoles. Rocky's spaceball is magnetically attached to the wall, observing everything. The first alien in a human spacecraft watches Ryland operate.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYCONTROL ROOM TOUR
"This is the control room. I operate the ship from here." Rocky sonar-scans the entire room from his wall perch.
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HAIL MARY — INTERIOR
WIDE — Hail Mary interior long shot. Ryland towing the spaceball from the control room toward the lab. Rocky's new home is a human spacecraft. A strange new domestic arrangement.
WIDERYLANDROCKYMOVING IN
"More rooms!" Ryland says. "More rooms!" echoes Rocky at a pitch an octave higher.
II
SHIP TOUR, LAMAI FLASHBACK
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MEDIUM — Lab doorway. Rocky's spaceball at the threshold. Instruments everywhere. Ryland gestures around the room with a sweeping arm. This is where the science happens.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYTHE LAB
"Good good good room!" Rocky squeals — his voice a full octave higher than normal.
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MEDIUM — Rocky rolling the spaceball across the steel lab table using magnets. Face by face, rolling forward and back. Not graceful, but effective. He explores every centimetre.
MEDIUMROCKYMAGNETIC ROLLING
"He uses his magnets on one face after another to roll across the table and back. Not graceful, but it gets the job done."
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MEDIUM — Rocky's spaceball in the lab with limbs pointing in four different directions simultaneously — then stopping — then pointing elsewhere. Like a kid in a candy shop, overwhelmed.
MEDIUMROCKYOVERWHELMED
"He starts to point in one direction, then stops. Then he picks a new thing, but stops there too."
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MEDIUM — Rocky's indecision resolves: one limb points firmly at the 3D printer. That one. What is that? The most advanced piece of human tech in the room, and the alien has chosen correctly.
MEDIUMROCKY3D PRINTER
"Finally he settles on the 3D printer. 'That. What is that, question?'"
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MEDIUM — Ryland at the centre, sketching a rotation gesture. A rotating ship in his mind, next to the tunnel — crossed out. The tunnel prevents rotation. Rocky already understood this.
MEDIUMRYLANDROTATION = GRAVITY
"That is why your ship rotates, question?" Rocky asks. "Yes!" Ryland says. Rocky already figured it out.
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HAIL MARY BLIP-A
WIDE — Rocky's grand proposal visualised: move all materials from Blip-A into Hail Mary, release the tunnel, then spin the ship for gravity. Two species. One lab. Science together.
WIDEROCKYTHE PROPOSAL
"You and me science how to kill Astrophage together. Save Earth. Save Erid. This is good plan, question?"
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CLOSE — Ryland grinning. He went from sole-surviving space explorer to guy with a wacky new roommate. He can see exactly how this is going to go. He doesn't mind.
CLOSERYLANDNEW ROOMMATE
"I've gone from 'sole-surviving space explorer' to 'guy with wacky new roommate.' It'll be interesting to see how this plays out."
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CARRIER — HANGAR BAY 2 — MEDICAL CENTER
WIDE — FLASHBACK. The carrier's second hangar bay repurposed as a medical research facility. Rows of equipment bays under industrial lighting. Military-grey, clinical. A world away from Tau Ceti.
WIDEFLASHBACKCARRIER
Hard cut from the future to the past. The medical bay where Ryland's fate was decided.
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MEDIUM — Three figures in the medical bay. Stratt (left), Ryland (centre), Dr. Lamai (right) bowing her head slightly, hands pressed together. A quiet, graceful introduction.
MEDIUMSTRATT+RYLANDDR. LAMAI — INTRODUCTION
Lamai: "It is a pleasure to meet you, Dr. Grace." Her company failed. Her research may save humanity.
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MEDIUM — A medical bay: unconscious monkey on a cot, robotic arm apparatus above monitoring and maintaining it. Vitals display. Eerie, quiet automation. Ryland has looked away.
MEDIUMCOMA TESTINGLAMAI
"A dozen bays each full of slightly different apparatus experiments, each connected to an unconscious monkey." Ryland looks away.
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WIDE — Lamai leads Stratt and Ryland along the row of occupied bays. Ryland walks slightly behind, eyes averted. Stratt watches attentively. Lamai is in her element.
WIDERYLAND+STRATTCOMA LAB TOUR
A dozen bays, each slightly different. All running towards the same problem: keep a human alive, unconscious, for 13 years.
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CLOSE — Stratt rolling up her sleeve without being asked. She doesn't wait to be tested last. She goes first. Lamai gets the needle in on the first try. Blood flows into the tube.
CLOSESTRATTBLOOD TEST
"Test my blood for the genes. I'm curious." Stratt said. Not asked. Said.
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MEDIUM — Lamai inserting the needle into Ryland's extended arm. Ryland's head is turned hard the other way. He gets queasy watching his own blood drawn. Stratt nearby, unmoved.
MEDIUMRYLANDBLOOD DRAW — QUEASY
"Lamai poked me in the arm. I looked away. I get a little queasy when I see my blood squirting into a tube."
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MEDIUM — Stratt flat and certain. Ryland genuinely stunned. Tens of thousands of volunteers — all knowing it's a one-way trip. That many people are willing to die for humanity.
MEDIUMSTRATT+RYLANDVOLUNTEERS
"We've already had tens of thousands of volunteers. All with the complete understanding that it's a one-way trip." "Wow." "How many of them are insane or suicidal?" "Probably a lot."
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WIDE — Bag after bag floating through the tunnel from the Blip-A. Ryland at the far end catching and stowing. Rocky's spaceball is parked on the wall watching, magnetically attached. He is not helping.
WIDERYLANDROCKYMOVING IN — BAGS
"Linda was absolutely Spartan compared to Rocky." Rocky hangs out in his ball while Ryland does all the physical work. Very reminiscent of Linda.
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MEDIUM — Dormitory crammed floor to ceiling with duffel bags in muddy Eridian colours, taped to everything. One pristine bunk preserved: Ryland's. Rocky's sleeping spot is a patch of floor.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYDORMITORY — FULL
"Linda was absolutely Spartan compared to Rocky." The entire dormitory transformed. One clear bunk. The rest: chaos.
III
MOVING IN, ROCKY'S 46 YEARS
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WIDE — Ryland outside in EVA suit, hands on the tunnel junction, rotating it to detach. Stars everywhere. The tunnel is the last thing connecting the two ships. He grumbles the whole time.
WIDERYLANDEVA — DETACHING TUNNEL
"You made the tunnel. You detach it." "How I detach tunnel? Me inside ball." Ryland groans and climbs into his EVA suit.
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MEDIUM — The tunnel drifts free. Two ships finally separate — Hail Mary left, Blip-A right, a gap growing between them. First time they've been physically apart since docking.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYTUNNEL DETACHED
The umbilical is cut. Now Ryland can spin the ship.
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MEDIUM — Rocky's spaceball navigating the pile of bags using magnets to grip metal pads on each duffel. Clambering, rearranging. Surprisingly adept for something that looks like a disco ball.
MEDIUMROCKYSURPRISINGLY ADEPT
"Rocky is surprisingly adept at doing things with a couple of magnets from inside a ball." Occasionally floats free — calls Ryland to replace him.
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CLOSE — Rocky's spaceball. Inside, his carapace is slumped lower than Ryland has ever seen it. Elbows above the level of his breathing holes. The posture of profound failure and grief.
CLOSEROCKYGRIEF POSTURE
"His carapace slumps down. His elbows are above the level of his breathing holes. Sometimes he dips his carapace when sad, but I've never seen him dip it this far."
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MEDIUM — Ryland pulling himself across the dormitory toward Rocky's position. No words yet. Just moving closer. The scientist trying to figure out how to comfort an alien engineer in grief.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYCOMFORT — APPROACHING
"Hey…don't think of it like that…" But how do you say that in Eridian chords?
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MEDIUM — Rocky's carapace has risen slightly. A degree, but visible. Ryland's hand rests against the sphere. This is what recovery looks like for an alien who has been alone for 46 years.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYTOGETHER
"Yes. Together." Rocky raises his carapace a bit. Two species. One Astrophage problem. Neither can do it alone.
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MEDIUM — Laptop with frequency analyser waveform and dictionary spreadsheet open. Ryland at keys, Rocky's spaceball nearby. Building new vocabulary in real time. This is how they communicate.
MEDIUMRYLANDROCKYVOCABULARY BUILDING
"We run into new words every day, but they're happening fewer and fewer times per day. That's something."
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YEAR 0 YEAR 46
WIDE — Abstract. Tau Ceti at centre. The Blip-A alone in orbit. A timeline across the bottom: Year 0 to Year 46. Forty-six Earth years. Rocky has been alone here longer than Ryland has been alive.
WIDEROCKY46 YEARS ALONE
"I am here forty-six Earth years, yes." He's been stuck in this system for longer than Ryland has been alive.
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0 291 yrs ~80 yrs
CLOSE — Rocky's spaceball. Portrait. Below him: a timeline showing his 291-year lifespan, with a human lifespan (~80 years) shown in comparison. Rocky is older than the United States.
CLOSEROCKY291 YEARS OLD
"How many years have you been alive?" "Two hundred ninety-one years." Rocky was born around the same time as George Washington.
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CLOSE — Ryland. Jaw dropped. Cannot speak for a moment. The alien being he's been talking to is older than his country. There are Eridians alive who remember Columbus.
CLOSERYLANDSTUNNED
"Holy cow. Rocky is older than the United States. He was born around the same time as George Washington."
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0 689 yrs avg 291 0 ~80 yrs avg ERIDIAN HUMAN
DIAGRAM — Eridian lifespan: 689 year average. Rocky at 291 years — not even middle-aged. Human lifespan shown to scale below. Rocky is young by the standards of his species.
DIAGRAMROCKYLIFESPAN COMPARISON
"He's not even that old for his species. There are old Eridians out there who were alive when Columbus discovered North America."
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STEP ONE: ASTROPHAGE SAMPLING
WIDE — Lab. Science begins. Ryland at the bench with instruments. Rocky's spaceball anchored to the table by magnets. The External Collection Unit is prepped. Two species working together.
WIDERYLANDROCKYSCIENCE BEGINS
"Okay, step one. Astrophage sampling." The mission they are both here for.
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EXTERNAL COLLECTION UNIT
CLOSE — The External Collection Unit. A device designed to capture Astrophage from space as the ship moves through infected regions. Rocky's ship had one. It fell off. Ryland's still works.
CLOSERYLANDECU — THE KEY DEVICE
"The External Collection Unit. Yes. I have a device for this." Rocky's reaction: "Relief!"
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CLOSE — Rocky's carapace raised high — all five limbs active and expressive. This is relief. Forty-six years of trying to collect Astrophage and failing. And now: a working collector.
CLOSEROCKYRELIEF
"Relief! I try so long. So many times. Fail." The most emotionally expressive Rocky has been since Ryland met him.
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WIDE — Two ships in deep space. Hail Mary left, Blip-A right, separated now — tunnel gone. Tau Ceti glowing distant. A light in Hail Mary's lab. The work has begun. The future of two worlds.
WIDERYLANDROCKYTHE WORK BEGINS — CODA
From "sole-surviving space explorer" to "guy with a wacky new roommate." Two ships. Two species. One problem. The science starts now.
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